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Post by mothsnap on Apr 14, 2018 14:42:00 GMT -5
I'm really not sure about my fourth chapter. Anyone want to beta read it?
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 17, 2018 18:17:39 GMT -5
Progress has been made! I finished Chapter 4 of Forest of Mist and am finally starting Plastic Teeth again :B
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 18, 2018 11:20:43 GMT -5
mothsnap: Really??? Can I read it?
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 18, 2018 11:23:14 GMT -5
which? plastic teeth? I'm not done yet. Do you want to see a WIP? I could use a little feedback.
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 18, 2018 11:24:23 GMT -5
which? plastic teeth? I'm not done yet. Do you want to see a WIP? I could use a little feedback. Both! If you updated Forest I'll read that too.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 18, 2018 11:29:41 GMT -5
which? plastic teeth? I'm not done yet. Do you want to see a WIP? I could use a little feedback. Both! If you updated Forest I'll read that too. I did. The link is my in signature. Plastic Teeth is here: sta.sh/01hw68v4eirf
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 18, 2018 11:30:17 GMT -5
mothsnap: Thanks! I'll get back to you after I read both!
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 18, 2018 11:31:46 GMT -5
WhispersintheMistThank you so much! I really appreciate this!
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Post by Owlmoon on Apr 20, 2018 7:39:17 GMT -5
Owlmoon I've started reading a bit of Stuck in the Middle. It's a little too "high school teen romance" for me. I was never really into those types of stories. If you want any critique I'd say be careful of pacing. Sometimes the character's actions are too sudden and it makes to seem rash and a bit silly for doing what they do. If you want to develop complex relationships you're going to have to take it slow. Yeah...I honestly wrote both of those a while ago. I haven't updated Stuck In The Middle or even read it in forever... I like to think I've improved a bit in the past year, so my apologies that you didn't like it.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 20, 2018 7:55:17 GMT -5
Owlmoon no need to apologize! We’re all just here to get better after all. Me included
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Post by Owlmoon on Apr 20, 2018 10:03:06 GMT -5
mothsnap Thanks. But yeah, I honestly need to edit these stuffs so badly. I should sometime. High school romance is honestly my type of thing. It's not everyone's tho.
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