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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 11:24:50 GMT -5
wingshadow hmm how much time has pasted between the first break up and the start of the story? You mean the time between when the story starts and the destruction of the original Clans?
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 11:37:46 GMT -5
wingshadow Oh so the story starts at the beginning? Then I meant the destruction of the clans up to when the clans are all rogue groups with fantasy names
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 11:47:39 GMT -5
wingshadow Oh so the story starts at the beginning? Then I meant the destruction of the clans up to when the clans are all rogue groups with fantasy names Well, I think it would be interesting to document that.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 11:51:05 GMT -5
k, but how long did it take? or did you not decide yet?
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 11:56:28 GMT -5
wingshadow k, but how long did it take? or did you not decide yet? I did not decide yet, right now I'm trying to worldbuild and find characters, while jotting down any plot ideas I have so I don't forget them. Also, when you tag me can you make the 'w' capital? I'm not being notified that you are for some reason.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 12:00:38 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist heck i was suppose to use your other name......... that's annoying. it's @ dewytwilight
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 12:01:57 GMT -5
Ah now I got tagged...thanks. I know it can be. Is your main in Forest of Mist Redclaw?
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 12:04:50 GMT -5
WhispersintheMistno it's wolfstripe, but redclaw is the character he'll be shipped with and also my favorite warriors oc.
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 12:08:04 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist no it's wolfstripe, but redclaw is the character he'll be shipped with and also my favorite warriors oc. Oh Wolfstripe is a cool name. I honestly have no idea who my main will be.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 12:12:14 GMT -5
WhispersintheMistWolfstripe is basically the relatable main character aka reader insert while Redclaw and the rest of the characters are more distinct or strange. I wouldn't call Wolfstripe boring, but he'll the necessary every man to experience a story like this through
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 14:18:50 GMT -5
mothsnap: So, are you planning to make Forest of Mist part of an arc, or is it like a stand-alone?
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 14:35:17 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist It's going to be an arc called Darkening Horizons. I already have the general idea for each book planned out. I'm also planning a series of short stories. 1. Forest of Mist POV: Wolfstripe Plot: Wolfstripe develops a fondness for Redclaw, the daughter of the clan deputy and a bit of a black sheep within MistClan. She seems to have lost interest in the clan and her clanmates, but is simultaneously the only one who can help him defeat IceClan. 2. Cold Moon POV: Toadpaw Plot: Wolfstripe is the prospective future deputy of MistClan. He and Redclaw are both given Cloudstar's granddaughters to mentor. When prodigy, Applepaw falls victim to an accident that renders her unable to become a warrior, she realizes just how much her former pride has isolated her. Toadpaw is Ravenheart's grandson who is in a political marriage with Applepaw. 3. Stray Winds POV: Stempaw Plot: Wildheart, the legendary warrior, is getting old, but refuses to retire. While hunting alone one day, he is attacked by a rogue and ends up killing her in self-defense. He adopts the rogue's sole remaining kit. Stempaw grows up wondering about his parentage. He meets a TideClan apprentice who is slowly going blind and the two run away together to find themselves. 4. Gathering Storm POV: Redclaw Plot: Toadshadow and Applebreeze have a litter of 6 kits. Mothkit, the eldest is destined to become leader one day. The downside is that he's a bit mentally impaired and only becomes seemingly more eccentric with time. Redclaw, who is in charge of overseeing the kits' development will be the ultimate judge of their futures. 5. Black Skies POV: Mothsnap Plot: Mothsnap receives a prophecy regarding Cricketkit who is destined to become future leader and possess great power, but also may end up being a threat to the clan. He must look after this kit as he grows and nurture his power, making sure he does not go down the down path. Which each day, his suspicious of Redclaw's embedding death grow stronger and he must find a way to save her or else watch her fall victim of the prophecy gone wrong. 6. Clear Weather POV: Budstar Plot: The story of Redclaw's grandmother. Budpaw sees her clan is not doing well under its fickle leader, Mousestar. She resolves to grow up and become one of the most feared and powerful leaders MistClan will ever know.
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 14:37:29 GMT -5
Wow, mothsnap, this is so cool! I would love to read this arc!
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 14:39:19 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist fair warning. im taking it super seriously so it's actually going to be book length. I already have the first three chapters done and posted. if you're interested in reading it, i'll be super honored to hear what you think
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 14:40:44 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist fair warning. im taking it super seriously so it's actually going to be book length. I already have the first three chapters done and posted. if you're interested in reading it, i'll be super honored to hear what you think I'll read it right now!
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 14:52:04 GMT -5
mothsnap: I'm still reading it, but I have to say that I just love the cats' wry humor!
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 14:55:36 GMT -5
WhispersintheMistthanks I tried to jolt a good helping of energy into the dialogue
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 14:56:43 GMT -5
mothsnap: Nice. I'm starting chapter two now. Gotta love the cliffhanger!
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 15:00:27 GMT -5
mothsnap: Just read the part where Pricklenose is telling Wolfstripe what he told Sootfeather and am shaking with laughter at his reaction
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 15:11:56 GMT -5
(Now starting Chapter 3)
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 15:27:59 GMT -5
This is really good, mothsnap! I'm afraid I'm no the best critic around, but I want to say that it's interesting and moves along nicely. Keep it up! I can't wait to see what happens next. One of my favorite parts: "Cloudeyes, tell Pricklenose his sister is a foxheart." "Your sister is a foxheart," the snowy tom muttered,his pale blue eyes staring blankly.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 15:31:52 GMT -5
WhispersintheMistGood to hear it. I'm working on chp 4 at the moment, but it'll have to wait until after my exams to get finished
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 15:33:45 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist Good to hear it. I'm working on chp 4 at the moment, but it'll have to wait until after my exams to get finished Well, keep up the good and work, and please notify me when you're done so I can read it!
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 6, 2018 15:41:46 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist will do. and be sure to keep me updated on your story as well. even if it's just more ideas you have. I'll try and suggest things or lend a hand
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 6, 2018 17:17:45 GMT -5
mothsnap: Thank you so much for being willing to listen to my wild ideas and wanting to help with them. I'll keep you posted. Right now I'm trying to create a map of the territories my story idea will be based on.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 8, 2018 12:46:19 GMT -5
Anyone writing this morning? I'm study for a test myself, but I wrote a bit last night. I started an original short story non-warriors related. I think it's going fairly well, but I need to add a bit more interesting narration. I want my writing style to be very distinct and fun
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Post by Sησω on Apr 8, 2018 17:24:08 GMT -5
Hello! I don't write warriors fanfiction, but I'd love to talk about my works.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 8, 2018 23:23:54 GMT -5
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Post by WhispersintheMist on Apr 9, 2018 9:02:15 GMT -5
Hey, mothsnap! How's your writing coming along? I hear you started a short story!
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 9, 2018 9:07:58 GMT -5
WhispersintheMist Quite nicely I have to say. It's not warriors related. Its about a vampire crashing on the couch of a man in nyc. It's meant to be simple and somewhat comedic. I've just finished the first third of it (i think).
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