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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 18:47:18 GMT -5
Nupe XD But that's okay yo! X3
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 19:01:21 GMT -5
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 19:05:11 GMT -5
YEET!!!!!!!
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 19:22:37 GMT -5
>> Austin ^^ -Spottedshadow- ^^ underworldt <<
Austin let Colm put his arm around him despite the electricity that pulsed through the both of them. Austin had never been put into such a situation, though his mother was totally absent minded when it came to him. She was always busy with his other siblings. He couldn't help but let a shudder audibly escape him, and he sheepishly looked at colm, thankful for his somewhat comforting presence.
A shadow crossed over the two boys as a little girl stepped out into the light. Austin cocked his head to the side and squinted, completely confused. "what the hell is going on...." he asked, placing a hand on the ground to steady himself. The young girl looked completely innocent, and rather young...
the young girl walked up to Colm and Austin, getting eye level with the two. "Don't let looks fool you." she sang, her eyes a ragin blue.
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 19:49:21 GMT -5
He hadn't registered the other boy looking at him, instead his eyes were darting around for anything to suddenly pop out and attack them. But it wasn't much of a strike as a calculated stepping little girl coming their way. Colm was about to say the same thing as Austin, but he felt a mix of feelings was over him at the sight. He had seen enough horror movies to know not to trust any strange small girl walking out from the shadows, but on the other hand he couldn't help but wanting to ask if she was lost due to his own little sisters.
But how confident she was walking up to him made him more unsure than anything, but once she spoke it only confirmed his fears. He found his arm pressing Austin back more as he held out his other arm halfhearted towards the little girl. "I'd advise you to stay back. Especially since I'm guessing you're the one who dragged us down here?" He honestly hoped that wasn't the case, since if it was true. She had them right where she wanted them.
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 20:10:07 GMT -5
>> Austin ^^ -Spottedshadow- ^^ underworld <<
Austin's jaw nearly dropped as Colm reasoned with the girl. I Hadn't even thought of that... he thought. The roots... the fog... Goosebumps covered his skin as he made eye contact with the girl.
The young girl let a sly smile cross her face at Colms response. "Silly boy." she said, patting Colms outstretched hand. "Your powers could do nothing to me...." She let her voice trail as a thought flickered across her face, her eyes flashing. "You were not the ones I wanted, though I was the one who brought you down here." she said quietly as though she didn't want the boys to hear.
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 20:20:08 GMT -5
Colm pulled his hand back when the little girl gave it a few pats. Her calm mannerism brought a chill down his spine and his powers suddenly made him feel useless in this matter once again. He didn't like how they were simply brought here by accident. "Well... then we are free to go, right?" Despite not believing that at all, all he could do was hope it could be that easy.
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 20:50:00 GMT -5
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 20:55:15 GMT -5
What???
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 20:58:15 GMT -5
i dunno. xD lemme get that reply up der,
so, i was thinking that this girl could give them each a special power to carry out the task this girl wants, and they each get a dragon??
Do you have an idea?
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 21:06:44 GMT -5
Hmmmm that, or she's like. "Well I can't let you leave that easily." Cause you know, you got to keep the magical stuff a secret.... something leads them to being sent somewhere deeper into magical territory where the little girl's leader is like. "Why did you literally bring them deeper into this stuff instead of just letting them go before seeing all of this?" And that's when the higher tier creature gifts them with a power and lets them be? But on their way out they are given a few gifts (but they snag some dergon eggs)??? XD
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 21:11:33 GMT -5
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 21:43:15 GMT -5
yeet
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 21:56:20 GMT -5
Sorry for my poof. im currently trying to fix my clans front page Dx
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 22:03:00 GMT -5
No no it's okay! Which one is it! I am curious to check out how it looks? OWO
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 22:18:45 GMT -5
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 22:24:05 GMT -5
OHHHH nice!!! A four based clan!!!! But uhh, are you uhhh... up for helpful criticism?
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 22:31:31 GMT -5
Sure! [im still trying to fix the front xD i totally messed it up. LOL
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 22:35:46 GMT -5
Godspeed my friend XD The background make it really hard to read against the bright coloring.
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 22:42:57 GMT -5
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 22:47:25 GMT -5
Mind me trying to help out a bit? I haven't messed with page layouts in awhile, but they always look like fin on here!
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 23:00:18 GMT -5
go look at it again and see if its better??
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 23:01:48 GMT -5
Yeahhh!!! The dark background definently works better if you keep the brighter font colors! Maybe just find a larger picture so it doesn't get copy pasted a bunch? But it does make it a lot easier to read!!!
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 23:03:59 GMT -5
i dunno how to find a larger picture... :\
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 23:14:21 GMT -5
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 23:14:51 GMT -5
Actually, let me get rid of that white thing in the edge
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 23:16:55 GMT -5
{{check it out again!! is ther anything else I should change??}}
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 23:17:55 GMT -5
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Post by Brindlebriar on Mar 12, 2018 23:18:49 GMT -5
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Post by -Spottedshadow- on Mar 12, 2018 23:19:52 GMT -5
Ummmm, the green is just a little bit too bright??? But that is just nit picking. It isn't too bad to read but it might get a bit hard to read once you get more clan members in and the text wall gets bigger.
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