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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 20:55:31 GMT -5
also, can i make the men who kidnapped her all mutants, just, looking the ninjas? i wanna make up some new ones. also, what does becca look like? have to ask forest. forestpawAlso i have a picture of becca one sec
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 20:56:48 GMT -5
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 21:02:55 GMT -5
did you draw that?
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 21:04:45 GMT -5
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 21:08:32 GMT -5
oh, phhhhpt. i was going to say, "you're not that bad at drawing at all!" anyways, is that what she's wearing on that specific day?
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 21:09:06 GMT -5
Lol
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Post by forestpaw on Mar 9, 2018 21:16:04 GMT -5
This is a lovely start! Although, the one who is a snake mutant needs to stay that way. He is a main bad guy later on. His name is Akil. I can send a picture of him if youβd like. And yes, theyβd probably be in ninja uniforms.
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 21:18:41 GMT -5
great, thanks for letting me know forestpaw! in that case, with all the information a need (for now) i can continue with the art (which is off to a very slow start because my short-battery chromebook keeps dying) also, can i have that picture of akil?
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 21:34:04 GMT -5
oof i better go, i have an outing to get ready for in 20 minutes. cya!
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Post by forestpaw on Mar 9, 2018 21:40:48 GMT -5
((Alright! And seriously, take your time with this! Youβre dojng a good job! I have to go aswell... but a picture of Akil is on the way!
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 21:50:41 GMT -5
oh wait. that's two hours. my clock is messed up. ok, i'm back. i started with a charecter design, you are doing coloring, correct π΅whitetail-Brill? just checking in, gonna go into art mode.
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 21:52:01 GMT -5
oh wait. that's two hours. my clock is messed up. ok, i'm back. i started with a charecter design, you are doing coloring, correct π΅whitetail-Brill? just checking in, gonna go into art mode. yep i can digliaze it
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 21:55:11 GMT -5
okay, great, i suck at working on computers. i will try to scan my charecter in... but i'm at a different house so i'm still trying to set it up.
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 21:56:53 GMT -5
Np
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 22:03:04 GMT -5
oof. now i feel like a pest xd. hmm... i'm just gonna list some questions i have and i will update list when i have more? i guess that will be easier than one question at a time... slowly... forever...
[/font][li] is becca wearing the clothes today that she is in the picture?[/li]
[li] what time of day is it?[/li]
[li] is it a busy city or... what's the setting?[/li]
[li] leo is the blue one, right? xd[/li]
[li] do you have any due dates for each page?[/li]
[li] is forestpaw helping with the process? idk just wondering[/li]
[li] does anyone see the kidnapping?[/li]
[li] is there anyone else involved in the kidnapping besides the people/mutants speaking?[/li] [/ul]
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 22:04:40 GMT -5
Forest helps with details mostly. I help with characters
Yes she is
No just leo
Evening like after supper so its dark as its in an allyway.
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 22:05:19 GMT -5
Leo has blue mask Its Manhattan so yes usely busy
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 22:05:33 GMT -5
No due dates
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 22:06:39 GMT -5
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 22:17:43 GMT -5
Ok...
Second page:
"Becca was in her cousins house. The window was open letting a night summer breeze roll in. She was listening to music through her headphones and was singing to herself.
"Mama said there'd be boys like you Tearin' my heart in two Doin' what you do best Takin' me for a ride Tellin' me pretty little lies But with you I can't resist""
-π΅whitetail-Brill
"Leo stopped as he heard singing. He didnβt think anything at all of it. There were plenty of singers in New York, in fact, he couldnβt even think of how many times he heard someone humming as they walked down the busy streets, or whistled as they dropped trash near the sewers, or even as they blared their favorite songs through their headphones for the world to hear. Leo did however check to see if the girl who was singing was safe.. she was. He saw a girl laying on her bed listening to music. He elegantly walked forward on the ledge of the building. He looked up to check on the girl again, but something grabbed his leg and made his fall from the ledge. Something sharp caught his leg, but he caught himself on the ledge. He looked down to see nothing that could have grabbed him below him. Leo heaved himself up. Pain searing into his leg as he tried to put pressure on it. He looked down to see a very nasty gash on his leg. There was nothing sharp on the ledge that could have cut him either... weird.. he thought. He then realized that he was in plain sight. Leo jumped and quickly limped into the shadows. He hoped the girl didnβt see him. He didnβt realize that his bright blue mask was sticking out in the shadows. The rest of him was hidden, but there was just enough moonlight to bring out itβs bright blue color."
-forestpaw
Third Page:
"Becca heard something. She stopped her music and sat up. "Hello?" She asked nervously. Thats when she saw something...blue? She got up and opened the balcony door. "Uhhh hello? Is someone out here?" She asked nervously. April told her to never ask that but curiously got to her. She couldn't help it!"
-π΅whitetail-Brill
"Leo thought quickly, realizing it was to late to move, βgah..β he quickly deepened his voice, β...just the cleaning crew. Coming to sweep up the rooftops.β He said. He felt a pang of embarrassment as he realized that that was a total Mikey thing to do. βYep... this place looks likes itβs in tip top shape now. Goodbye!β He said while ducking behind the corner of the building."
-forestpaw
Forth Page:
"Suddenly a pair of hands grabbed Becca by the shoulders and pulled her out of the window. βYouβre coming with us miss...β said a strange male voice. They then put a bag over her head and dropped down to ground level.
βPackage acquired.β Said another male voice. It was a slow and sleek voice.
One of the men took out a walkie talkie, βweβve got her.β He said. There was a short moment of silence before he spoke again, βweβve got some time. We can do whatever we want with her...β he said with an evil laugh.
βI sssssssaw we eeeat her!β Said one as he coiled around the girl. He was obviously some sort of snake mutant.
βNo. They want her alive. But..β he laughed as he looked at the helpless girl. βI have a few... other ideas of how we can pass the time.β He said in a menacing voice."
-forestpaw
Fith Page:
"Becca muttered than had an idea. She took a deep breath and started to scream in a high pitch way. She kept screaming hoping someone heard her cry for help. She kept screaming till she couched and lost her voice."
-π΅whitetail-Brill
"The snake mutant squeezed her hard as she let out the scream as an effort to suffocate her. The other man kicked her hard on the rib cage, βshut up you little brat! Before you get it!β He threatened."
-forestpaw
Sixth Page:
"Leo heard the screams and turned from surprise. He put his leg down but immediately picked it back up in a hiss of pain. He limped slowly over to the ledge and saw what they were doing. He quickly checked the window in which he previously saw her and felt a pang of panic as she wasnβt there anymore. Leo sighed, βof course. Just my luck, I get injured and THEN I need to fight.β He huffed. He looked down at his leg and untied his mask. Not like there was any identity to hide, if anything, he was hiding it by take it off. He held his breath as he wrapped the mask tightly around his leg above his wound so he couldnβt feel the pain as much. Leo then got up and sighed, βhere goes nothing!β He then jumped down onto the ground. βIβll give you five seconds to let her go!β
One of the men threw a hard punch at Leo. Leo just dodged the blow. βOkay. Or we could just skip right to the firsts!β He said while jumping up and kicking the guy in the face. It sent him flying back. He then went to the man strangling the girl. He slashed the guys scales making his hiss and recoil. Leo then flipped and caugh the man fist that was flying at him from behind. Leo grabbed his arm and kneed him hard in the stomach. He then turned and kicked the snake man in the chest who was trying to come at him from behind."
-forestpaw
Seventh Page:
"The other man regained his breath and balance and went at Leo again. He saw the gash on his leg and smirked. He kicked Leoβs gash hard making his leg buckle. Leo couldnβt help but to scream in pain. Both then men smiled with pleasure. The snake man coiled around Leo, hissing in pain from the cuts on his tail. βYouβre going to paaaaay for that turtle!β He spat. Leo growled, βnot today!β He said while getting his arms free from the right bundle of scales around him. He grabbed both men by the head and knocked them together. Both fell unconscious and Leo was freed. Leo dropped and gasped for air. He had to hold back his reaction to the pain that was spreading up his leg. His leg was beginning to go numb. Leo forced himself to get up and limp toward the girl. He gently untied the ropes on her and removed the bag from her head"
-forestpaw
Eighth Page:
"Becca narrowed her eyes and slowly looked up at him. She than noticed his leg. She got up. She grabbed his hand and dragged him up the stairs without a word. She pulled him through the window carefully than made him sit down. Thats when Leo knew the place. It was Aprils house! He been their before! She came back from the kitchen with a first aid kit. She went on her knees and untied his mask. Than opened the first aid kit and started to try and fix his leg."
-π΅whitetail-Brill
Ninth Page:
"Leo for some reason didnβt fight against her. He noticed he house was actually Aprilβs. He looked at the girl but realized she wasnβt April. He looked around. βW-who are y-β He was cut off when a searing pain shot up through his leg making his ears ring. He tried his best to seem tough and hold the pain. He was very tense and his face was very scrunched from the pain. βWho are you? And who were those guys?β He asked in a tense, raspy voice as he was fighting through the overwhelming pain."
-forestpaw
Tenth Page:
A tall and regal woman walked down the ally way that the two men were laying in. She had tattoos covering most of her body, but a lot of it was covered with an all black uniform. Her jet black hair was a medium length, though it was tied into a tight, high braid. Her face was almost flawless. She also bared two large, yet beautiful black bag like wings. The woman aprouched one of the men and kicked him hard, βget up.β She said ina thick accent. The accent seemed like a mix of a Brazilian accent and an Asian accent."
-forestpaw
added 4-5-6 pages. i forgot how many :p
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 22:20:09 GMT -5
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 22:23:53 GMT -5
Np
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 22:32:06 GMT -5
how's the page ideas? i can edit if needed.
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 22:32:51 GMT -5
how's the page ideas? i can edit if needed. looks good ^^
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 22:35:11 GMT -5
great! i am working on rough sketching the first couple pages. i'll probably be done with 2-3 pages around sunday or monday.
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 22:35:51 GMT -5
great! i am working on rough sketching the first couple pages. i'll probably be done with 2-3 pages around sunday or monday. okay ^^
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 23:03:12 GMT -5
any ideas for the comic? i feel like i have no brain phhhht.
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 23:09:45 GMT -5
any ideas for the comic? i feel like i have no brain phhhht. like what?
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Post by πππππ πππππππππ on Mar 9, 2018 23:11:20 GMT -5
i dunno, things you want to add that aren't in the text, background ideas, character proportions, e.c.t.
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Post by π΅whitetail-Brill on Mar 9, 2018 23:15:12 GMT -5
Right now i cant think of anything right now
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