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Post by โฒฯฮนะบฮฑฦฯ
ััโฒ on Jul 30, 2018 3:11:38 GMT -5
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แดส Yay for finally updating this! Last two chapters coming in the next day or so (hopefully)
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Post by โฒฯฮนะบฮฑฦฯ
ััโฒ on Aug 1, 2018 16:49:19 GMT -5
"i love you, too, you big lump" PERFECT. AND THEY SAY ROMANCE IS DEAD. and that chapter ending? predictable, but since i know where this is headed, I FEAR. I love sassy Silversky lol. Cinder has to get it from somewhere right? XD And good. Fear
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Post by Pyropelt on Aug 13, 2018 3:56:59 GMT -5
Chapter 8 is great!! I like how Foxchaser kept quiet about Stonetail and Silversky's relationship. You write really good detail! I like your descriptions. It makes it easy to picture the landscape. And aww cute ending! But sad too, because of what is still to come.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 26, 2018 9:40:36 GMT -5
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ััโฒ - Here's your review! Any questions, please ask! Shining Skies is a compelling read, both as a companion to Pikafueyโs trilogy and as a satisfying story in its own right. The central romance between Stonetail and Silversky is a delight to read, evolving realistically and endearingly. The fast pace makes the story hard to stop reading, while still allowing space for Stonetailโs growth over the time span of the fic. As always, I enjoyed Pikafueyโs streamlined writing style and pitch perfect dialogue. However, I felt that the updates on minor characters could be reduced, while the timeskips sometimes feel jumpy. I would recommend Shining Skies to anyone who likes romance, character driven reads and the atmosphere of canon.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Feb 25, 2019 12:47:00 GMT -5
What an ending! You do a great job with all the emotions - even though I knew what was coming, Stonetail's grief really hit home... Congrats on finishing!
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Post by โฒฯฮนะบฮฑฦฯ
ััโฒ on Feb 27, 2019 20:20:39 GMT -5
What an ending! You do a great job with all the emotions - even though I knew what was coming, Stonetail's grief really hit home... Congrats on finishing! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it <3 As sad as it was, I wanted to show their side of things during all of it.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Mar 3, 2019 11:24:38 GMT -5
It was sad, but I definitely enjoyed it! Really nice to see Stone's perspective of meeting his sons
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Post by Pyropelt on Mar 4, 2019 23:16:50 GMT -5
Those last couple chapters were really great! You did a good job showing Stonetail's grief!
Ahis shock at seeing his kits again was nice too.
Plus I liked the brief snippet of Icestar's past.
I liked the ending! This was a good story!
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Post by Pyropelt on Jun 25, 2019 11:54:55 GMT -5
Silversky's death was sad I like how you showed more of LeafClan after he brought her body back there. Oh poor Icestar! Losing his first mate and kits must have been so hard. Can't wait to read it, if you decide to put it in your Icestar story. I think it's kind of neat how you had Icestar showing sympathy to Stonetail one moment, then being weary of LeafClan cats on ReedClan's territory the next. Just a little detail, but still interesting! Aww what a nice and happy ending for Stonetail! I'm glad he got to see Shadowheart and Blackflame alive for the first time. And to have it blend so seamlessly in with your other story too. You did a good job with that! The final chapters were a good note to leave this story off of.
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Post by โฒฯฮนะบฮฑฦฯ
ััโฒ on Aug 25, 2019 20:26:12 GMT -5
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แดส We love our Stonetail's don't we XD Pyropelt thank you <3 I love your feedback on my stories x3 ALSO New art! Silversky and her babies, by the lovely Shellykey!
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Post by โฒฯฮนะบฮฑฦฯ
ััโฒ on Oct 26, 2019 0:10:53 GMT -5
Bump~
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Post by โฒฯฮนะบฮฑฦฯ
ััโฒ on Mar 25, 2024 0:31:52 GMT -5
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