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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on May 16, 2018 0:46:50 GMT -5
Next chapter is now up!!!
A extra long chapter, and it's also a special flash-back one x3
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on May 18, 2018 3:06:48 GMT -5
Chapter Twelve is now up! x3
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on May 20, 2018 19:29:18 GMT -5
if i haven't read and commented on the new chapters by some time tomorrow, ping me here/discord and remind me, please! Will do x3
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on May 30, 2018 19:57:16 GMT -5
holy smokes. that is a completely different shadow from the one we know and love. you've got a few cases of she-cats with an apostrophe you don't actually need in ch 11, heads up. so that's how he ended up in the river... mmmm i can feel the confrontation coming and i am WORRIED for cinder Yes old Shadowheart was a jerk lol. A very sexist jerk XD And I'll go back and look when I have a chance. Thanks x3
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Post by Pyropelt on Jun 6, 2018 16:43:29 GMT -5
Chapter 11 & 12 were so great! I hope that Shadowheart won't have to kill Cinder. And that his brother, Blackflame, won't die either. I like Birdfeather. She's an interesting character. I wonder if she'll tie into the prophecy.
By the way, I like the prophecy. It's a little vague but intriguing. I like how you don't spell it out for us right away, or try and have Shadowheart want to solve it straight afterwards.
Hmm wonder what he'll have to do to solve it.
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jun 21, 2018 16:03:15 GMT -5
he needed a good bump in the head, i think. get some priorities straight. np! Definitely did! He was such a mean cat back then lol Chapter 11 & 12 were so great! I hope that Shadowheart won't have to kill Cinder. And that his brother, Blackflame, won't die either. I like Birdfeather. She's an interesting character. I wonder if she'll tie into the prophecy. By the way, I like the prophecy. It's a little vague but intriguing. I like how you don't spell it out for us right away, or try and have Shadowheart want to solve it straight afterwards. Hmm wonder what he'll have to do to solve it. Thanks! And Birdfeather is just a BG character x3 She isn't major haha. And what are prophecies if not vague? Lmao
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jun 21, 2018 16:03:57 GMT -5
Chapter Thirteen is now up!
Sorry for the sporadic updates guys. I was in the hospital for a week due to mental health issues, and I'm still trying to get myself together.
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Post by Pyropelt on Jun 21, 2018 17:36:26 GMT -5
Nice! I liked the easy going with this chapter! It was refreshing after the drama and battling.
Oh I really loved when Shadowheart played in the snow!! In the books is where I don't agree that it's childish or should be mocked. I think that's great to show a playful side of a warrior! Thanks for showing that.
I like the end of the chapter, with the whole feeling of togetherness and hope!
Excited for the next chapter!
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jun 28, 2018 21:21:59 GMT -5
Pyropelt Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it ! I loved writing this chapter because of Blackflame honestly XD α΄α΄α΄sα΄
α΄Κ And lmao he is captain oblivious XD
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 5, 2018 20:31:47 GMT -5
he IS and he's killing me I love my oblivious son XD
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 6, 2018 16:49:42 GMT -5
Next chapter is now up!
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 7, 2018 21:02:56 GMT -5
shadowheart, firelight, and blackflame found dead in miami. lol but for real, they earned that chewing out by foxstar. bunch of dolts. i love them, but that was a BAD CHOICE. also? HOW DARE YOU, YOU MONSTER. HOW. DARE???!!!! Lmao they got their ears clawed off xD And heh heh it gets even worse from here out xP
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 8, 2018 11:39:44 GMT -5
wait. wait what do you mean it gets worse PIKA, NO It be called Dark Horizons for a reason >)
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 13, 2018 22:06:14 GMT -5
Pyropelt α΄α΄α΄sα΄
α΄Κ Next chapter is now up! Ready for some pain? I am lol
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 14, 2018 15:49:21 GMT -5
HEY. HEY.YOU LEAVE THEM ALONE. STOP HURTING THEM. NO. PAIN IS A MUST
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Post by Pyropelt on Jul 15, 2018 23:34:07 GMT -5
Awesome! They're back in the Clan again.
Poor Sleetwhisker! And I really liked how you had Foxstar handle things and the speech. It was well written!
I liked that Shadowheart and Blackflame offered each other comfort and entwined tails.
Oh man Hawk showed up when they were on their way to bury Sleetwhisker? I didn't expect that!
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 19, 2018 16:56:00 GMT -5
Awesome! They're back in the Clan again. Poor Sleetwhisker! And I really liked how you had Foxstar handle things and the speech. It was well written! I liked that Shadowheart and Blackflame offered each other comfort and entwined tails. Oh man Hawk showed up when they were on their way to bury Sleetwhisker? I didn't expect that! Thank you! And yeah things are pretty intense right now haha α΄α΄α΄sα΄
α΄ΚNext chapter is up!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 24, 2018 5:22:19 GMT -5
β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² - One review, finally! Again, if you have any questions please ask c: Dark Horizons is a gripping read which is sure to provide a breathtaking end to an ambitious trilogy. The plot twists in this saga don't stop coming, setting up plentiful subplots while also building towards the central drama. As always, β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ²βs dialogue and action are spot on, vividly creating a world that feels like canon. The character development is also strong, as the young characters from the earlier books grow up and choose their sides in the upcoming struggle. However, although the pacing has picked up from the earlier books, I feel that too much time is spent on side characters such as Stonetail, which slows the momentum of the main plot. I would recommend Dark Horizons to anyone who likes βrealisticβ Warriors, as well as long, twist-filled reads.
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Post by Pyropelt on Jul 28, 2018 15:46:11 GMT -5
Wow what a cool battle scene!!
Oh yeah, I forgot Stonetail was their father. Nice to remember that.
Aw man, I didn't think Shadowheart would have to fight Cinder. Too bad.
Hopefully Blackflame and Shadowheart don't die. I like them a lot. Also I liked how you had the cats say snappy comebacks, like when Shadowheart told Dune that he'd tear out his other eye. Normally I find comebacks boring but you make them witty and cool!
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Post by β²ΟΞΉΠΊΞ±ΖΟ
ΡΡβ² on Jul 30, 2018 3:14:01 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Thank you so much for the awesome review! <3 Pyropelt Thanks! And yeah haha Stonetail loves his kits. He's a good dad. And yeah, Cinder has spent more time under Hawk's control sadly, so her mindset and loyalties are all screwed up. α΄α΄α΄sα΄
α΄Κ Good feel the betrayal cuz it gets worse
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