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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 20, 2017 20:15:50 GMT -5
Looking back, I'm honestly not even sure if I'll make BramblexSquirrel a thing, or go with BramblexFeather/StormxTawny/CrowxSquirrel (or StormxSquirrel and CrowxTawny). I do still want kits to be related to both Tigerstar and Firestar, though.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 20, 2017 20:20:37 GMT -5
Looking back, I'm honestly not even sure if I'll make BramblexSquirrel a thing, or go with BramblexFeather/StormxTawny/CrowxSquirrel (or StormxSquirrel and CrowxTawny). I do still want kits to be related to both Tigerstar and Firestar, though. Curious, why Storm x Tawny? I get Storm x Squirrel and Feather x Bramble, even Crow x Tawny, since one is more patient and humble, the other is more short fused and cranky, etc.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 20, 2017 20:26:03 GMT -5
Looking back, I'm honestly not even sure if I'll make BramblexSquirrel a thing, or go with BramblexFeather/StormxTawny/CrowxSquirrel (or StormxSquirrel and CrowxTawny). I do still want kits to be related to both Tigerstar and Firestar, though. Curious, why Storm x Tawny? I get Storm x Squirrel and Feather x Bramble, even Crow x Tawny, since one is more patient and humble, the other is more short fused and cranky, etc. Note that I haven't read Midnight or Moonrise in forever, but whenever I did read those books, it always seemed like Stormfur showed more concern for Tawnypelt than even Brambleclaw did. I don't even ship them, I'm just wondering if I should expand on Stormfur's concern for Tawnypelt to mean something more or not.
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Post by Redfleck on Jul 20, 2017 20:50:16 GMT -5
People do this all the time with fanfiction for other books and stuff. They just rewrite the whole story and put their own spin on things. I'd say go for it! It's definitely doable.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 20, 2017 20:53:37 GMT -5
People do this all the time with fanfiction for other books and stuff. They just rewrite the whole story and put their own spin on things. I'd say go for it! It's definitely doable. Thanks, though I already know that people do this all the time. I've even read some of them, even for Warriors. I know my idea isn't anything new.
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Post by Amber on Jul 20, 2017 21:00:24 GMT -5
Looking back, I'm honestly not even sure if I'll make BramblexSquirrel a thing, or go with BramblexFeather/StormxTawny/CrowxSquirrel (or StormxSquirrel and CrowxTawny). I do still want kits to be related to both Tigerstar and Firestar, though. Perhaps for characters being related to both Tigerstar and Firestar can be done through great-grandchildren? For example, Squirrelflight gets with some tom and has kits with him while Brambleclaw/Tawnypelt get their own mates and they have kits together. Then a kit of Squirrelflight and kit of Brambleclaw/Tawnypelt become mates and have kits of their own? Another option is have Hawkfrost(Assuming you're going to have him in the rewrite)move to ThunderClan or get in a relationship with Leafpool or Squirrelflight, maybe even Whitewing, though she's Firestar's great-niece. Not a fan of the latter one, but it is an idea.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 20, 2017 21:10:08 GMT -5
Looking back, I'm honestly not even sure if I'll make BramblexSquirrel a thing, or go with BramblexFeather/StormxTawny/CrowxSquirrel (or StormxSquirrel and CrowxTawny). I do still want kits to be related to both Tigerstar and Firestar, though. Perhaps for characters being related to both Tigerstar and Firestar can be done through great-grandchildren? For example, Squirrelflight gets with some tom and has kits with him while Brambleclaw/Tawnypelt get their own mates and they have kits together. Then a kit of Squirrelflight and kit of Brambleclaw/Tawnypelt become mates and have kits of their own? Another option is have Hawkfrost(Assuming you're going to have him in the rewrite)move to ThunderClan or get in a relationship with Leafpool or Squirrelflight, maybe even Whitewing, though she's Firestar's great-niece. Not a fan of the latter one, but it is an idea. I was considering the first one as an option, but I'm still not completely sure. Hawkfrost will still be in the rewrite, though so far I don't have any plans for him being with a ThunderClan cat.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 20, 2017 22:04:13 GMT -5
Hmm...instead of Ashfur I think a Stormfur x Squirrelflight x Hawkfrost love triangle would be interesting....
Stormfur and Hawkfrost did have a type of rivalry, and they're both from RiverClanw while Squirrel is a TC cat, it would be nice to see more of RC this way.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 20, 2017 22:16:42 GMT -5
Hmm...instead of Ashfur I think a Stormfur x Squirrelflight x Hawkfrost love triangle would be interesting.... Stormfur and Hawkfrost did have a type of rivalry, and they're both from RiverClanw while Squirrel is a TC cat, it would be nice to see more of RC this way. True. I'm trying to avoid using too many love triangles, though, and I really can't see Squirrelflight with Hawkfrost. Stormfur, maybe, but not Hawkfrost. Then again, if I do go down this route, maybe Mothwing could at least attempt to manipulate Hawkfrost by somehow using his affection for Squirrelflight to her advantage? Oh, and going to back to the whole changing parents thing, I decided to just make Whitestorm the father of all three of Willowpelt's litters.
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Post by Basement Cat on Jul 20, 2017 22:30:01 GMT -5
Dang Mothflight, you are getting a ton of questions. I would have lost patience at this point, but I'm an arse, so...
I just feel the need to say something. Listening to people is great. It shows you care about people's thoughts, and are paying attention. But ultimately, YOU are the one who makes these decisions. Don't feel forced to please everybody. You'll drain yourself then become bitter and cynical like me and nobody wants that. );
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 20, 2017 22:50:04 GMT -5
Dang Mothflight, you are getting a ton of questions. I would have lost patience at this point, but I'm an arse, so... I just feel the need to say something. Listening to people is great. It shows you care about people's thoughts, and are paying attention. But ultimately, YOU are the one who makes these decisions. Don't feel forced to please everybody. You'll drain yourself then become bitter and cynical like me and nobody wants that. ); I've kept that in mind, but thank you. I'm just taking suggestions now in case I end up getting writer's block later, especially considering I already have writer's block for this one other story I'm working on. I plan on working on this Warriors rewrite in the meantime. Besides, I'm already bitter and cynical.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 21, 2017 0:21:51 GMT -5
Hmm...instead of Ashfur I think a Stormfur x Squirrelflight x Hawkfrost love triangle would be interesting.... Stormfur and Hawkfrost did have a type of rivalry, and they're both from RiverClanw while Squirrel is a TC cat, it would be nice to see more of RC this way. True. I'm trying to avoid using too many love triangles, though, and I really can't see Squirrelflight with Hawkfrost. Stormfur, maybe, but not Hawkfrost. Then again, if I do go down this route, maybe Mothwing could at least attempt to manipulate Hawkfrost by somehow using his affection for Squirrelflight to her advantage? Oh, and going to back to the whole changing parents thing, I decided to just make Whitestorm the father of all three of Willowpelt's litters. Ooo that's perfect! It would tie into evil Mothwing! What if he goes along with it too because he thinks she'll choose Stormfur, imagine it: At a gathering and they're talking. Mothwing: Oh jeez, are you still mooning over her? *caught Hawkfrost staring at Squirrelflight from across the clearing* Mothwing: You shouldn't bother....she's not worth the time--- Hawkfrost: Don't talk of her like that, you don't know anything--- Mothwing: I know enough. I know that you like her....*moves around her brother* Mothwing: I know that you want to be more than an associate, a friend... Mothwing: But you think you can't have her because she's from a different Clan...and yet....*she moves her tail to point back to Squirrelflight* Hawkfrost: *sees Stormfur walking over and smiling happily at her, the two seem to have a close type of air about them* Hawkfrost: *feels a pang of jealousy like a claw down his heart* Hawkfrost: *looks away* So what...they're just friends...and this is a gathering... Mothwing: Oh my dear brother...don't you see...Leopardstar won't live forever, and neither will Mistyfoot, one day a new deputy will be chosen...and it will be him....*she pressed against her brother to feign comforting him* Mothwing: He'll be leader...and still have her....but...I know a way....I know how to change all of this. Hawkfrost: *looks at his sister with wide eyes* Mothwing: I...can help you.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 21, 2017 0:42:11 GMT -5
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I'm serious, you writing these little scripted scenes brings me joy. XD But yeah, exactly like that. I actually liked Ashfur as a villain though, but I also don't want to give Squirrelflight too many love interests either. What I might do instead however is maybe expand on his prejudice against Tigerstar's kits. After Brindleface's death, he pretty much becomes more and more bitter towards Tigerstar's kin as he grows older to the point of wanting to get rid of them, thinking he's helping his Clan by preventing another Tigerstar from happening again. However, he ends up doing more harm than good and is too stubborn to admit he was wrong, and Mothwing turning out to be evil only makes things worse. This is enough to get him into the Dark Forest.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 21, 2017 2:22:21 GMT -5
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Maplefrostโ
I'm serious, you writing these little scripted scenes brings me joy. XD But yeah, exactly like that. I actually liked Ashfur as a villain though, but I also don't want to give Squirrelflight too many love interests either. What I might do instead however is maybe expand on his prejudice against Tigerstar's kits. After Brindleface's death, he pretty much becomes more and more bitter towards Tigerstar's kin as he grows older to the point of wanting to get rid of them, thinking he's helping his Clan by preventing another Tigerstar from happening again. However, he ends up doing more harm than good and is too stubborn to admit he was wrong, and Mothwing turning out to be evil only makes things worse. This is enough to get him into the Dark Forest. Just trying to give ya some inspiration! *wink wink* But yeah I can totally see that! I always found Ashfur's character to be complicating and interesting, I never down right hated him, but I did think he still deserved the DF. I just wish he had more concrete reasons for his issues, there was a lot of potential ones like his hatred toward Bramblestar, over his father killing his mother. But the Erins never expanded on that. I do like that idea of Ashfur being like....ya know self-righteous, he'd be in the lawful evil alignment if he thinks he's purging Tiger's kin for the greater good. His mother's death can be a major reason why his mentality is so unstable too.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 21, 2017 2:39:10 GMT -5
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Maplefrostโ
I'm serious, you writing these little scripted scenes brings me joy. XD But yeah, exactly like that. I actually liked Ashfur as a villain though, but I also don't want to give Squirrelflight too many love interests either. What I might do instead however is maybe expand on his prejudice against Tigerstar's kits. After Brindleface's death, he pretty much becomes more and more bitter towards Tigerstar's kin as he grows older to the point of wanting to get rid of them, thinking he's helping his Clan by preventing another Tigerstar from happening again. However, he ends up doing more harm than good and is too stubborn to admit he was wrong, and Mothwing turning out to be evil only makes things worse. This is enough to get him into the Dark Forest. Just trying to give ya some inspiration! *wink wink* But yeah I can totally see that! I always found Ashfur's character to be complicating and interesting, I never down right hated him, but I did think he still deserved the DF. I just wish he had more concrete reasons for his issues, there was a lot of potential ones like his hatred toward Bramblestar, over his father killing his mother. But the Erins never expanded on that. I do like that idea of Ashfur being like....ya know self-righteous, he'd be in the lawful evil alignment if he thinks he's purging Tiger's kin for the greater good. His mother's death can be a major reason why his mentality is so unstable too. Exactly! And since I'll be making Redtail Ashfur's father... Well, he would have even more of a reason to hate Tigerstar and the rest of his bloodline for killing not just one parent, but both of them. Ferncloud and Sandstorm will of course serve as an intentional contrast to him, as they treat Brambleclaw, Tawnypelt, Hawkfrost, and Mothwing as their own cats. Speaking of Tigerstar's family, I'm still wondering whether Tadpole should be in this or not.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 21, 2017 14:29:57 GMT -5
Just trying to give ya some inspiration! *wink wink* But yeah I can totally see that! I always found Ashfur's character to be complicating and interesting, I never down right hated him, but I did think he still deserved the DF. I just wish he had more concrete reasons for his issues, there was a lot of potential ones like his hatred toward Bramblestar, over his father killing his mother. But the Erins never expanded on that. I do like that idea of Ashfur being like....ya know self-righteous, he'd be in the lawful evil alignment if he thinks he's purging Tiger's kin for the greater good. His mother's death can be a major reason why his mentality is so unstable too. Exactly! And since I'll be making Redtail Ashfur's father... Well, he would have even more of a reason to hate Tigerstar and the rest of his bloodline for killing not just one parent, but both of them. Ferncloud and Sandstorm will of course serve as an intentional contrast to him, as they treat Brambleclaw, Tawnypelt, Hawkfrost, and Mothwing as their own cats. Speaking of Tigerstar's family, I'm still wondering whether Tadpole should be in this or not. Actually it's probably a good idea to have Tadpole live, cause if you plan to kill of Mothwing, for being an evil medicine cat, Tadpole could always replace her as one? Maybe he was supposed to be chosen, but Moth faked the sign in her favor instead.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 21, 2017 14:43:05 GMT -5
Exactly! And since I'll be making Redtail Ashfur's father... Well, he would have even more of a reason to hate Tigerstar and the rest of his bloodline for killing not just one parent, but both of them. Ferncloud and Sandstorm will of course serve as an intentional contrast to him, as they treat Brambleclaw, Tawnypelt, Hawkfrost, and Mothwing as their own cats. Speaking of Tigerstar's family, I'm still wondering whether Tadpole should be in this or not. Actually it's probably a good idea to have Tadpole live, cause if you plan to kill of Mothwing, for being an evil medicine cat, Tadpole could always replace her as one? Maybe he was supposed to be chosen, but Moth faked the sign in her favor instead. Maybe. I'm still not entirely sure how Mothwing will die though (or at least defeated), but I'll cross that bridge when I get there. As for Hawkfrost, I kind of want him to be redeemed, but at the same time I kind of don't. I still don't know what I'm going to do with the other characters from TNP, though I do want Tawnypelt to have a bigger role than she did in canon. Maybe she could even accept Tigerstar's offer to train her, but she turns out to be a spy instead. Feathertail might also live in this AU, and maybe she could be involved in Mothwing and Hawkfrost's plot somehow, like perhaps Hawkfrost attempts to use her (mostly to spite Stormfur and try to make Squirrelflight jealous, but Squirrelflight remains oblivious). If I do decide to go with BramblexFeather as opposed to BramblexSquirrel (if only for now) then perhaps Feathertail could eventually become pregnant with Brambleclaw's kits, but uses Hawkfrost as a cover up until she decides to move to ThunderClan. I do still want the Tribe to be in this, just not in the way they were portrayed in canon.
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Post by kinkajou on Jul 21, 2017 16:05:27 GMT -5
Idea for hawk and moth: Make him obviously evil from the start and make moth all nice and sweet like in canon. Everyone assumes hawk was using her to fake signs and stuff. But then plot twist - hawk was good all along and moth was making things up on her own
Also I can't see hawk wanting/having a forbidden mate but whatever you want to do
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 21, 2017 16:08:00 GMT -5
Idea for hawk and moth: Make him obviously evil from the start and make moth all nice and sweet like in canon. Everyone assumes hawk was using her to fake signs and stuff. But then plot twist - hawk was good all along and moth was making things up on her own Also I can't see hawk wanting/having a forbidden mate but whatever you want to do Honestly, I'm just brainstorming here. Nothing is 100% official yet. And regarding your idea, that's pretty much what I had in mind. I even mentioned in an earlier post how I wish to make Hawkfrost into a red herring while the real villain is Mothwing.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 21, 2017 19:40:30 GMT -5
Actually it's probably a good idea to have Tadpole live, cause if you plan to kill of Mothwing, for being an evil medicine cat, Tadpole could always replace her as one? Maybe he was supposed to be chosen, but Moth faked the sign in her favor instead. Maybe. I'm still not entirely sure how Mothwing will die though (or at least defeated), but I'll cross that bridge when I get there. As for Hawkfrost, I kind of want him to be redeemed, but at the same time I kind of don't. I still don't know what I'm going to do with the other characters from TNP, though I do want Tawnypelt to have a bigger role than she did in canon. Maybe she could even accept Tigerstar's offer to train her, but she turns out to be a spy instead. Feathertail might also live in this AU, and maybe she could be involved in Mothwing and Hawkfrost's plot somehow, like perhaps Hawkfrost attempts to use her (mostly to spite Stormfur and try to make Squirrelflight jealous, but Squirrelflight remains oblivious). If I do decide to go with BramblexFeather as opposed to BramblexSquirrel (if only for now) then perhaps Feathertail could eventually become pregnant with Brambleclaw's kits, but uses Hawkfrost as a cover up until she decides to move to ThunderClan. I do still want the Tribe to be in this, just not in the way they were portrayed in canon. Oh yes I love the smell of drama, this sounds 10x more better than the three and LeafCrow already. So what if Hawk didn't know who the father was, of Feather's kits, but, in a Crowfeathery way, offered to be the father, to cover it up, in return he got to use her and pretend to be her mate, to spite Storm and Squirrel. But like you said, Squirrel is oblivious, and Storm gets over protective, not wanting her to be around a cat like Hawk. Maybe the only one that knows the real father is Feather, and she doesn't even tell Storm yet, and he thinks it's Hawk. And when Storm is ridiculing her, she gets angry at him, pointing out his obvious affections for Squirrelflight. I've always wanted to see these two argue more tbh, but make up for it later. Now imagine the final conclusion, and such, and all the secrets are out, Squirrelflight can join RC, and Feathertail joins TC. Cause if Silver is going to live, Gray will have loyalties to where ever she chooses to stay, whether it's in RC or TC. Maybe in this scenario, Gray moved to RC to be with Silverstream. Hence why Squirrel would join RC to be with Stormfur and Feathertail would join TC to be with Brambleclaw. I like the idea of them becoming close on the journey to the lake and eventually hitting it off once they returned home. While maybe Squirrel and Storm don't officially get together until Squirrel moves to RC. With the journeying cats, are you going to kill one of them off? Since Feathertail is going to live, and only really died because of the Tribe and their nonsense. Will you still kill off one of the journeying cats? I personally prefer the older tribe, as oppose to the new, current one, they're too much like a cult.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 21, 2017 19:44:38 GMT -5
Idea for hawk and moth: Make him obviously evil from the start and make moth all nice and sweet like in canon. Everyone assumes hawk was using her to fake signs and stuff. But then plot twist - hawk was good all along and moth was making things up on her own Also I can't see hawk wanting/having a forbidden mate but whatever you want to do Honestly, I'm just brainstorming here. Nothing is 100% official yet. And regarding your idea, that's pretty much what I had in mind. I even mentioned in an earlier post how I wish to make Hawkfrost into a red herring while the real villain is Mothwing. I don't think Hawk having a forbidden mate is too farfetched tbh? Because he was willing to switch clans just to have a possibility of being deputy of a clan in general; that whole mess with Mudclaw and Onestar's battle, etc. Also his loyalties wasn't to his clan per say, but to his father, and his own ambitious seeds planted into his head by him. I wouldn't put it past him to want a mate either, like how Tiger sired several kits, but even if the she-cat is from another clan, he'd probably still desire her, cause he's not bound by clan rules tbh. Now if Moth is going to remake him, then there's always the possibility the change in his personality will also change how he feels about certain cats. I also personally like the idea of Hawk having a mate and kits, over Tawnypelt, even if her kits were cool, at least 2/3 were, she deserved better.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 21, 2017 20:07:31 GMT -5
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Maplefrostโ
Exactly! Although I'm having trouble imagining Squirrelflight as a RiverClan cat, but I guess Stormfur could work as a ThunderClan cat (probably because we already saw him as one in canon). And I'm still not even sure if Graystripe would move to RiverClan even if Silverstream had lived, considering his heart was always with ThunderClan, and even for the rewrite I can't see him as a RiverClan cat, nor do I see Silverstream as a ThunderClan cat. Or maybe one could move to the other's Clan at least up to a certain point. As for the journeying cats, I'm not sure if any of them will be killed off, though I have been toying with the idea of Stormfur being the prophesied cat for the Tribe instead of Feathertail (except he lives). Which reminds me, I'm still not sure what I'm going to do with Crowfeather (his warrior name is likely to change) and Tawnypelt. And I'm still sold on the idea of kits from Tigerstar and Firestar's bloodlines from within their generation, so maybe at some point, Stormfur and Feathertail somehow die or the relationship doesn't work out for whatever reason and Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight comfort each other until they end up falling in love and having kits. Or I could just do TadpolexLeafpool/Squirrelflight ( if I don't have CrowxLeaf or StormxSquirrel/BramblexSquirrel be a thing). I don't want to include too many forbidden relationships, though. And I agree. If the Tribe is going to be in this, then I want them to be like they were in Ancient times rather than the cult-like group they are now. I don't even dislike them, but they do make me uncomfortable at times. I might have RowanxTawny still be a thing if I don't go with CrowxTawny (or at least not make it a permanent thing), though Tawnypelt will definitely get more respect in this remake either way. Oh, and you mentioning the Three just gave me a brilliant idea even though I was considering it as an alternative anyway. I still don't know who will give birth to the Three, so for now, I think I'll just have Squirrelflight give birth to three kits, but so does Leafpool like she does in canon (she reveals her secret early in this, and the Clan is far from happy about it) and after the prophecy is revealed to Jaypaw, it leads to this little subplot with Jaypaw trying to figure out which cats are also part of the prophecyโhis siblings or his first cousins (or one of each). Of course, this is also assuming I don't make Squirrelflight barren, or just give her kits much later like in canon. And if I do go with TadpolexLeafpool as opposed to CrowxLeaf, this is also one way I could incorporate Ashfur into this. After Mothwing and Hawkfrost are defeated and Brambleclaw's affair with Feathertail is revealed, Leafpool's relationship with Tadpole is the final straw for Ashfur on how Tigerstar's kin can't be trusted. Ashfur then accuses Tadpole of pretty much brainwashing Leafpool into straying away from her duty as a medicine cat and while Firestar tries to settle things, Ashfur challenges Firestar's authority. Sandstorm and Ferncloud manage to calm him down, but the tension doesn't go away and this eventually leads to a civil war within the Clan. But like I said, I don't want there to be too many forbidden relationships, but this is still a possibility and I suppose I could make an exception if it adds to the storyline.
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Post by Lightflame on Jul 22, 2017 12:09:41 GMT -5
Looking back, I'm honestly not even sure if I'll make BramblexSquirrel a thing, or go with BramblexFeather/StormxTawny/CrowxSquirrel (or StormxSquirrel and CrowxTawny). I do still want kits to be related to both Tigerstar and Firestar, though. Having all the characters in a group neatly pair up with each other always feels like a bit of a copout, personally. If you're rewriting, you can always shift a few personalities, or add new characters or interactions that weren't originally there. And I'm still sold on the idea of kits from Tigerstar and Firestar's bloodlines from within their generation, so maybe at some point, Stormfur and Feathertail somehow die or the relationship doesn't work out for whatever reason and Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight comfort each other until they end up falling in love and having kits. You could go crazy with it and do Leafpool/Hawkfrost, or you could add a new kit of Firestar or Tigerstar if you wanted.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 22, 2017 12:25:25 GMT -5
Looking back, I'm honestly not even sure if I'll make BramblexSquirrel a thing, or go with BramblexFeather/StormxTawny/CrowxSquirrel (or StormxSquirrel and CrowxTawny). I do still want kits to be related to both Tigerstar and Firestar, though. Having all the characters in a group neatly pair up with each other always feels like a bit of a copout, personally. If you're rewriting, you can always shift a few personalities, or add new characters or interactions that weren't originally there. And I'm still sold on the idea of kits from Tigerstar and Firestar's bloodlines from within their generation, so maybe at some point, Stormfur and Feathertail somehow die or the relationship doesn't work out for whatever reason and Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight comfort each other until they end up falling in love and having kits. You could go crazy with it and do Leafpool/Hawkfrost, or you could add a new kit of Firestar or Tigerstar if you wanted. Which is exactly why I'm actually a bit hesitant on having too many pairings, especially within a group. But yeah, personalities and interactions between certain characters will definitely change. HawkxLeaf... Maybe...? I have considered of just adding a new kit for either Firestar or Tigerstar (or both), I just need to figure them out first.
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Post by Rainstorm1026 on Jul 22, 2017 12:27:39 GMT -5
Having all the characters in a group neatly pair up with each other always feels like a bit of a copout, personally. If you're rewriting, you can always shift a few personalities, or add new characters or interactions that weren't originally there. You could go crazy with it and do Leafpool/Hawkfrost, or you could add a new kit of Firestar or Tigerstar if you wanted. Which is exactly why I'm actually a bit hesitant on having too many pairings, especially within a group. But yeah, personalities and interactions between certain characters will definitely change. HawkxLeaf... Maybe...? I have considered of just adding a new kit for either Firestar or Tigerstar (or both), I just need to figure them out first. If you kept Tadpole alive, that could work also.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 22, 2017 12:34:13 GMT -5
Which is exactly why I'm actually a bit hesitant on having too many pairings, especially within a group. But yeah, personalities and interactions between certain characters will definitely change. HawkxLeaf... Maybe...? I have considered of just adding a new kit for either Firestar or Tigerstar (or both), I just need to figure them out first. If you kept Tadpole alive, that could work also. I know. I've mentioned in an earlier post that I've considered keeping Tadpole alive.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 22, 2017 14:32:17 GMT -5
Hmmm....so basically:
Squirrelflight (TC-Firestar Kin) x Stormfur (RC-Graystripe Kin)
Brambleclaw (TC-Tigerstar Kin) x Feathertail (RC-Graystripe Kin)
Tawnypelt (SC-Tigerstar Kin) x Crowfeather (WC-Tallstar's Kin)
Tadpole (RC-Tigerstar Kin) x Leafpool (TC-Firestar Kin)
Now the question is which of them will have kits?
Also will there be more background forbidden romances, if you want to be a limit on forbidden romances in general?
Heres a list of in canon forbidden romances:
Appledusk (RC) x Mapleshade (TC) Past-Broke up Crowfeather (WC) x Leafpool (TC) 2nd S- Broke up Graystripe (TC) x Silverstream (RC) 1st S - One died Hal (Kittypet) x Featherstorm (SC) Past- Broke up Oakheart (RC) x Bluestar (TC) Past - Broke up Reedfeather (WC) x Fallowtail (RC) Past - Broke up Gorsetail (WC) x Beechfur (RC) Unknown/Possibly 3rd S Ryewhisker (WC) x Cloudberry (RC) Past - One died Tigerstar(TC/SC) and Sasha (Kittypet/Loner) 1st S/Manga - Broke up Eaglestorm (WC) and Squirrelwhisker (TC) Past - Changed Clans Onestar (WC) and Smoke (Kittypet) Past/1st S - Broke up
WindClan and ThunderClan can't seem to keep it to themselves, lol.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Jul 22, 2017 14:46:08 GMT -5
Also, some suggestions, you can have Tadpole join ShadowClan, so he can stay with Tawnypelt, his other kin, and reconnect with her.
You can have Storm x Squirrel be a thing, but they break up, or Storm dies, etc. Squirrel could have his kits, though. Or Stormfur moves to TC to be with Squirrel, etc.
Bramble and Feather could be that one couple that lives happily, lel.
Tawny and Crow could continue to have a forbidden romance, built up on tension from their journey.
Tadpole is probably the one that convinces Tawny to end it, before it gets further and she settles for Rowan instead, etc.
I have more but I have to go to work now.
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Post by โ Sparse โ on Jul 22, 2017 14:47:39 GMT -5
that would take you a long time though yeh
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Jul 22, 2017 16:31:52 GMT -5
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Maplefrostโ
I definitely want BramblexFeather to have kits, as well as TadpolexLeaf. I thought about it, and I'll have StormxSquirrel also have kits, but maybe Stormfur could be killed by Hawkfrost and/or Mothwing before he gets to meet them. Tadpole would move to ThunderClan afterwards for Leafpool, but they would temporarily go to RiverClan to seek refuge after things get really bad in ThunderClan. I decided to take out CrowxTawny since I deemed it unnecessary, but I guess it could be sort of referenced, like maybe some cat thinks that Tawnypelt and Crowfeather are together since BramblexFeather and StormxSquirrel paired up after the journey, but in reality they're just friends. Both of them remain loyal to their respective Clans. And yeah, I mentioned in an earlier post that there will still be a few background forbidden romances. So far, the only one I'll include is RainxSwallow, or I'll just make that a separate thing. I mostly don't want to include too many within the main storyline. Space it out, I guess you could say.
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