Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2016 23:48:35 GMT -5
Sept 28, 2016 14:50:24 GMT -5 @mongrel said:
I updated Lad's backstory. Please post it ASAP.
P.S. Could you get rid of the excerpt under "Other" that mentions a cat family? OBLITERATE it. I scratched it out. It just seemed like a waste.
You also need to remove the excerpt about Lad earning his name and replace it with a new one. It should only say:
"Lad earned his name from the Elder Adonis, who was one of the first dogs he met after escaping the Animal Hospital."
(I'm going to post Adonis's application soon, obviously.)
You also need to add "Epidemic" to the Glossary. It says:
The Epidemic is the fatal disease that annihilated the Safeguarded and created the Beasts. This disease is the main event of the story, and is what gave rise to the plotline of The Wilderness to begin with. It is unknown how the Epidemic came to be, but few dogs dare study the Beasts for fear of being attacked or contracting illnesses/parasites.
I'll check it out.
Oh, also, note that there is a sparse forest encircling the city where the dogs live. It used to be heavily polluted and dangerous, but the wildlife is now returning and thus some dogs might hunt here.
I also need to post a FAQ.
GAME:
Horse (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: DO NOT PURSUE THE HORSE SOLITARILY. YOU WILL LIKELY BE MAIMED OR KILLED.
Pony (Domesticated)
See "horse" ↑
White-tailed Deer (a.k.a. the whitetail)
(Common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: IF PURSUING THE WHITETAIL ALONE, TAKE THE UTMOST CAUTION. DISCRETION IS ADVISED. HORNED VARIANTS ARE TO BE PURSUED WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION.
Cow (Domesticated)
(Common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: COWS ARE LARGE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS. THEY ARE TO BE HUNTED WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION, HORNED VARIANTS, IN PARTICULAR.
Donkey (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: DONKEYS ARE LARGE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS. PURSUE DONKEYS WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION.
Mule/Hinny (Domesticated)
See "donkey" ↑
Camel (Domesticated)
(Uncommon, and rarely hunted for fear of injury; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: CAMELS ARE VERY DANGEROUS ANIMALS. THEY ARE VERY RISKY PREY AND ARE TO BE AVOIDED BY ALL BUT VERY SKILLED PROFESSIONALS.
Llama (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: LLAMAS ARE LARGE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS.
Alpaca (Domesticated)
See "llama" ↑
Pig (Domesticated)
(Common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: LARGER PIGS CAN BE POWERFUL OPPONENTS.
Sheep (Domesticated)
(Common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: RAMS, DEADLY ANIMALS, ARE TO BE AVOIDED.
Goat (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: GOATS ARE POTENTIALLY DANGEROUS ANIMALS. PURSUE GOATS WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION.
Eastern gray squirrel
(Common; novice-level prey)
Chipmunk
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
Mouse
(Common; novice-level prey)
Rat
(Common, but rarely eaten; intermediate-level prey)
Crow
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
Raccoon
(Common, but rarely hunted for fear of injury; advanced-level prey)
Red fox
(Common, but rarely hunted; advanced-level prey)
Gray fox
(Common, but rarely hunted; advanced-level prey)
Coyote
(Common, but challenging to catch; advanced-level prey)
Cat (Domesticated)
(Common, but rarely hunted for fear of injury; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: CATS ARE FIERCE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS.
American toad
(Common; novice-level prey)
American green tree frog
(Slightly less common; novice-level prey)
Bobwhite quail
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
Chicken (Domesticated)
(Common; novice-level prey)
Duck (Domesticated)
Goose (Domesticated)
Cottontail rabbit
(Common; novice-level prey)
Rabbit (Domesticated)
See "cottontail rabbit" ↑
Abandoned goods—"abandoned goods" are the supermarket items scavenged by the dogs. Goods can come from either the butchery or the grocery. (Very common; a pup could catch it)
P.S. Could you get rid of the excerpt under "Other" that mentions a cat family? OBLITERATE it. I scratched it out. It just seemed like a waste.
You also need to remove the excerpt about Lad earning his name and replace it with a new one. It should only say:
"Lad earned his name from the Elder Adonis, who was one of the first dogs he met after escaping the Animal Hospital."
(I'm going to post Adonis's application soon, obviously.)
You also need to add "Epidemic" to the Glossary. It says:
The Epidemic is the fatal disease that annihilated the Safeguarded and created the Beasts. This disease is the main event of the story, and is what gave rise to the plotline of The Wilderness to begin with. It is unknown how the Epidemic came to be, but few dogs dare study the Beasts for fear of being attacked or contracting illnesses/parasites.
I'll check it out.
Oh, also, note that there is a sparse forest encircling the city where the dogs live. It used to be heavily polluted and dangerous, but the wildlife is now returning and thus some dogs might hunt here.
I also need to post a FAQ.
GAME:
Horse (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: DO NOT PURSUE THE HORSE SOLITARILY. YOU WILL LIKELY BE MAIMED OR KILLED.
Pony (Domesticated)
See "horse" ↑
White-tailed Deer (a.k.a. the whitetail)
(Common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: IF PURSUING THE WHITETAIL ALONE, TAKE THE UTMOST CAUTION. DISCRETION IS ADVISED. HORNED VARIANTS ARE TO BE PURSUED WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION.
Cow (Domesticated)
(Common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: COWS ARE LARGE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS. THEY ARE TO BE HUNTED WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION, HORNED VARIANTS, IN PARTICULAR.
Donkey (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: DONKEYS ARE LARGE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS. PURSUE DONKEYS WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION.
Mule/Hinny (Domesticated)
See "donkey" ↑
Camel (Domesticated)
(Uncommon, and rarely hunted for fear of injury; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: CAMELS ARE VERY DANGEROUS ANIMALS. THEY ARE VERY RISKY PREY AND ARE TO BE AVOIDED BY ALL BUT VERY SKILLED PROFESSIONALS.
Llama (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: LLAMAS ARE LARGE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS.
Alpaca (Domesticated)
See "llama" ↑
Pig (Domesticated)
(Common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: LARGER PIGS CAN BE POWERFUL OPPONENTS.
Sheep (Domesticated)
(Common; intermediate-level prey)
WARNING: RAMS, DEADLY ANIMALS, ARE TO BE AVOIDED.
Goat (Domesticated)
(Slightly less common; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: GOATS ARE POTENTIALLY DANGEROUS ANIMALS. PURSUE GOATS WITH THE UTMOST CAUTION.
Eastern gray squirrel
(Common; novice-level prey)
Chipmunk
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
Mouse
(Common; novice-level prey)
Rat
(Common, but rarely eaten; intermediate-level prey)
Crow
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
Raccoon
(Common, but rarely hunted for fear of injury; advanced-level prey)
Red fox
(Common, but rarely hunted; advanced-level prey)
Gray fox
(Common, but rarely hunted; advanced-level prey)
Coyote
(Common, but challenging to catch; advanced-level prey)
Cat (Domesticated)
(Common, but rarely hunted for fear of injury; advanced-level prey)
WARNING: CATS ARE FIERCE, DANGEROUS ANIMALS.
American toad
(Common; novice-level prey)
American green tree frog
(Slightly less common; novice-level prey)
Bobwhite quail
(Slightly less common; intermediate-level prey)
Chicken (Domesticated)
(Common; novice-level prey)
Duck (Domesticated)
Goose (Domesticated)
Cottontail rabbit
(Common; novice-level prey)
Rabbit (Domesticated)
See "cottontail rabbit" ↑
Abandoned goods—"abandoned goods" are the supermarket items scavenged by the dogs. Goods can come from either the butchery or the grocery. (Very common; a pup could catch it)