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Post by Bluebell on Aug 7, 2016 16:13:10 GMT -5
Is there anything different you would have changed in this series?
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 7, 2016 19:43:30 GMT -5
The ultra crappy un-climatic ending of Path of Stars.
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Post by Bluebell on Aug 7, 2016 19:49:07 GMT -5
Ah, that's understandable. I wish they just stuck with One Eye as the villain.
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Post by Bluebell on Aug 9, 2016 19:03:33 GMT -5
I also wish Skystar had a different motive for doing the things he did. I liked the concept of doing bad to get a good outcome, he just seemed inconsistent with things.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 9, 2016 19:57:37 GMT -5
The only things I would change would be giving the romances more development and making Slash a more menacing threat than he really was.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 9, 2016 20:17:02 GMT -5
I would make Ivypool die in The Last Hope
There are no words to describe how much I hate her
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Post by Bluebell on Aug 9, 2016 20:31:06 GMT -5
I would make Ivypool die in The Last Hope There are no words to describe how much I hate her If it makes you feel any better, she wasn't born yet in Dawn of the Clans.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 9, 2016 20:32:48 GMT -5
I would make Ivypool die in The Last Hope There are no words to describe how much I hate her If it makes you feel any better, she wasn't born yet in Dawn of the Clans. No wonder it's my favorite series
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Post by Bluebell on Aug 9, 2016 20:36:28 GMT -5
More romantic development was one of the biggest drawback of DotC so I definitely agree on that.
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Post by theRavenflight on Aug 16, 2016 13:37:34 GMT -5
idk but I feel like the pairing of Clear Sky and Star Flower was ???????. I would have omitted that altogether. And I agree that mates need more development. And Slash should have been more menacing. One Eye and Tom were pretty threatening but then Slash was just like an angsty teen.
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Changes?
Aug 20, 2016 21:47:57 GMT -5
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Post by Pupachu on Aug 20, 2016 21:47:57 GMT -5
This series was good but not very memorable like the others were. I've reread them a few times and the last time I read them was when the last one came out and honestly I don't remember a lot of the characters or who anyone was. I would have made it more memorable and develop more of the plot lines.
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Post by The Noble Dragon on Aug 26, 2016 20:31:48 GMT -5
I've only read the first book but it seems there's too much Romance drama and not enough build up for any of them??? Like give me more fighting and back story and less love triangles pls.
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Changes?
May 20, 2017 15:47:18 GMT -5
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Post by Mother Dark on May 20, 2017 15:47:18 GMT -5
The romance really could have been developed more and I just want to know more about how the clans developed further. I would probably be one of few that would read if they developed it all the way to the point we met Rusty at. I know some of the Super Editions do that but I want more. Also I want to know if anything happens between Thunder and Violet and all the kits and it makes me crazy not knowing what happened after that.
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