Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on May 30, 2017 20:08:30 GMT -5
Hello there! Back when I first started on the original forms, I had created an IceClan. I thought, what the heck? Why not try and give it another go? So I want to make a two-clan, semi-literate roleplay.
What is needed:
-Layout
-Rules
-Introduction
-History -Plots
IceClan Leader; Larkstar; role-played by Larkfeather Deputy; Open Medicine Cat; Open
FireClan Leader; (The person who assists the most will be able to control FireClan) Deputy; Open Medicine Cat; Open
History: Almost 60 moons after Gray Wing took his fellow mountain cats off the mountains, another group of the mountain cats decided to disperse. Led by Shattering Skies, they went a different way down the mountain. Several moons later they were hungry, tired, and now stranded at the mercy of a flooding river. Three other warriors stepped up, Blossoming Lily, Spotted Deer, and Lonely Wolf, and together with Shattering Skies, safely corralled the band of cats passed the river and to safety on the other side. The four cats led the cats together, forming a strong bond. They incidentally traveled north, heading into colder territory. After scouting the nearby land, Shattering Skies declared that they would stay. It wouldn't be an easy split, as the group had become close, but tensions would rise. They had gained several more cats on the pathway to their new homes and several of the rogues fell into disagreement with the mountain cats. Fighting ensued, and it was Starry Moon that stopped the fighting, forcing the group to separate into four separate groups to live separately. MoonClan was led by Shattering Skies and Starry Moon, SunClan was led by Spotted Deer, DayClan was led by Blossoming Lily, and NightClan ruled by Lonely Wolf. Everything went relatively peacefully for nearly 30 moons, the only problem was the wolves, foxes, and rare cougars, until everything changed. An endless, violent blizzard enveloped over the Clans, killing almost half of the Clan cats. The four Clans had joined together to support each other throughout the storm, but very few actually survived. Two Clans are born out of the remnants of the fallen Clans, IceClan and FireClan.
Introduction: As you padded into the bushes of the light forest-land, your paws tired and pounding against the snow-covered ground. You ventured on, not quite sure why you bothered to even travel as you were almost going to shut down with exhaustion. As you emerge from the forest, you find yourself in a completely snow-covered area. You shiver as the cold wind blows through your fur, and quickly try to find a space for refuge. Quickly you find a cave onto your right, and quickly run into to it, curling up and going to sleep to regain your energy. When you wake up, you see the sky, black as a wolf. I mustβve slept the whole sun-highβ¦ You thought, standing up off the cold, gray stone floor of the cave and traveled outside it. Right into a semi-circle of cats. βLarkstar!β One of the five catβs shouted, βwe have the cat!β βRight here!β Another exclaimed. βWeak, by the looks of it!β You trembled in fear, judging by their muscled appearances these cats could fight. If you wanted to escape, all you could do is go back in the cave for a method of escape. But somehow, you found enough courage to stand up against all these strange cats. βI know this,β a she-cat, probably the leader as all the others were looking up at her, said. βWhat are you doing on our Clan territory, cat?β She questioned you, padding closer to you and stopping one wolf-length away, her eyes judging. You knew she could smell your fear-scent, but tried to seem brave anyway. βI didnβt know I was on your Clanβsβ¦territory? If I am disturbing youβ¦β Then let me leave! Your mind finished, making you tremble even more. The she-cat purred, her judging facade replaced with something you couldnβt place your paw on, but it looked happy. βI like you, acting brave even though you arenβt. We could use more of thatβ¦β her eyes became wistful, as though reflecting on something that had happened in the past. Then her eyes became clear again, shining brightly. βWould you like to join our Clan?β
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larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on May 30, 2017 20:08:43 GMT -5
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Post by AΠΌΠ²Ξ΅ΡΟΞΉΠΈg on May 30, 2017 22:28:43 GMT -5
I'm interested in helping. I'm not good with making stuff like layouts, but I can do most other things.
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larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on May 31, 2017 9:18:57 GMT -5
AΠΌΠ²Ξ΅ΡΟΞΉΠΈg I can probably pull together a simple layout that looks nice but it won't have any banners or anything. First things first, introduction and history
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Post by Thornheart on May 31, 2017 16:45:53 GMT -5
I'd love to help you do this! (I can code, so yay?)
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Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on May 31, 2017 18:18:34 GMT -5
That's perfect Thornheart
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Post by Thornheart on May 31, 2017 19:30:45 GMT -5
Do you want me to do the introduction?
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larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on May 31, 2017 19:48:04 GMT -5
Sure, go for it. I'm trying to think of a history at the moment
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larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on May 31, 2017 20:11:37 GMT -5
Almost 60 moons after Gray Wing took his fellow mountain cats off the mountains, another group of the mountain cats decided to disperse. Led by Shattering Skies, they went a different way down the mountain. Several moons later they were hungry, tired, and now stranded at the mercy of a flooding river. Three other warriors stepped up, Blossoming Lily, Spotted Deer, and Lonely Wolf, and together with Shattering Skies, safely corralled the band of cats passed the river and to safety on the other side. The four cats led the cats together, forming a strong bond. They incidentally traveled north, heading into colder territory. After scouting the nearby land, Shattering Skies declared that they would stay. It wouldn't be an easy split, as the group had become close, but tensions would rise. They had gained several more cats on the pathway to their new homes and several of the rogues fell into disagreement with the mountain cats. Fighting ensued, and it was Starry Moon that stopped the fighting, forcing the group to separate into four separate groups to live separately. MoonClan was led by Shattering Skies and Starry Moon, SunClan was led by Spotted Deer, DayClan was led by Blossoming Lily, and NightClan ruled by Lonely Wolf. Everything went relatively peacefully for nearly 30 moons, the only problem was the wolves, foxes, and rare cougars, until everything changed. An endless, violent blizzard enveloped over the Clans, killing almost half of the Clan cats. The four Clans had joined together to support each other throughout the storm, but very few actually survived. Two Clans are born out of the remnants of the fallen Clans, IceClan and FireClan.
How does this seem?
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 1, 2017 14:35:37 GMT -5
((Looks Good!)
Introduction
As you padded into the bushes of the light forest-land, your paws tired and pounding against the snow-covered ground. You ventured on, not quite sure why you bothered to even travel as you were almost going to shut down with exhaustion. As you emerge from the forest, you find yourself in a completely snow-covered area. You shiver as the cold wind blows through your fur, and quickly try to find a space for refuge. Quickly you find a cave onto your right, and quickly run into to it, curling up and going to sleep to regain your energy.
When you wake up, you see the sky, black as a wolf.
I mustβve slept the whole sun-highβ¦ You thought, standing up off the cold, gray stone floor of the cave and traveled outside it. Right into a semi-circle of cats.
βLarkstar!β One of the five catβs shouted, βwe have the cat!β
βRight here!β Another exclaimed. βWeak, by the looks of it!β
You trembled in fear, judging by their muscled appearances these cats could fight. If you wanted to escape, all you could do is go back in the cave for a method of escape. But somehow, you found enough courage to stand up against all these strange cats. βI know this,β a she-cat, probably the leader as all the others were looking up at her, said. βWhat are you doing on our Clan territory, cat?β She questioned you, padding closer to you and stopping one wolf-length away, her eyes judging. You knew she could smell your fear-scent, but tried to seem brave anyway. βI didnβt know I was on your Clanβsβ¦territory? If I am disturbing youβ¦β
Then let me leave! Your mind finished, making you tremble even more.
The she-cat purred, her judging facade replaced with something you couldnβt place your paw on, but it looked happy. βI like you, acting brave even though you arenβt. We could use more of thatβ¦β her eyes became wistful, as though reflecting on something that had happened in the past. Then her eyes became clear again, shining brightly. βWould you like to join our Clan?β
((Good? You can change it, if you don't like it!)
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Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on Jun 1, 2017 15:14:08 GMT -5
I like it! It's all good! I will add it to the main post now.
I forgot, we should probably do a territory layout, like for each Clan, a couple of major landmarks.
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Post by Winona on Jun 2, 2017 7:03:36 GMT -5
Ooh, I love the intro and history. I would love to help, too. =3
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 2, 2017 15:55:46 GMT -5
larkfeather Iβll start on a layout β what do you want it to be? (I'm just starting bases for the layout. I need the color, if you want borders, etc.)
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Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on Jun 2, 2017 17:51:13 GMT -5
Ah! Sorry! I dozed off!
I personally prefer several posts to separate everything up, I'm honestly not picky with the layout. Something simple that looks nice and neat. Feel free to do what you think is best
Color wise, if you can stick to black, white and blue for IceClan and black, white, and a light red/orange or non bright yellow Thornheart Winona
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 2, 2017 19:03:32 GMT -5
((These are very basic codes, so please tell me if I need to change anything and/or you don't like the layouts. I also edited a few things, like the introduction.))
IceClan
Leader:
Larkstar:
Role-played by Larkfeather
Deputy:
Open
Medicine Cat:
Open
History:
Almost 60 moons after Gray Wing took his fellow mountain cats off the mountains, another group of the mountain cats decided to disperse. Led by Shattering Skies, they went a different way down the mountain. Several moons later they were hungry, tired, and now stranded at the mercy of a flooding river. Three other warriors stepped up, Blossoming Lily, Spotted Deer, and Lonely Wolf, and together with Shattering Skies, safely corralled the band of cats passed the river and to safety on the other side. The four cats led the cats together, forming a strong bond. They incidentally traveled north, heading into colder territory. After scouting the nearby land, Shattering Skies declared that they would stay. It wouldn't be an easy split, as the group had become close, but tensions would rise. They had gained several more cats on the pathway to their new homes and several of the rogues fell into disagreement with the mountain cats. Fighting ensued, and it was Starry Moon that stopped the fighting, forcing the group to separate into four separate groups to live separately. MoonClan was led by Shattering Skies and Starry Moon, SunClan was led by Spotted Deer, DayClan was led by Blossoming Lily, and NightClan ruled by Lonely Wolf. Everything went relatively peacefully for nearly 30 moons, the only problem was the wolves, foxes, and rare cougars, until everything changed. An endless, violent blizzard enveloped over the Clans, killing almost half of the Clan cats. The four Clans had joined together to support each other throughout the storm, but very few actually survived. Two Clans are born out of the remnants of the fallen Clans, IceClan and FireClan.
Introduction:
As you padded into the bushes of the light forest-land, your paws became tired and soon began dragging against the snow-covered ground. You ventured on, not quite sure why you bothered to even travel as you felt you were almost going to shut down with exhaustion. As you emerge from the forest, you find yourself in a completely snow-covered area. You shiver as the cold wind blows through your fur, and quickly try to find a space for refuge. You find a cave onto your right, and run into to it, curling up on the cold stone floor and going to sleep to regain your energy.
When you wake up, you see the sky, black as a wolf.
I mustβve slept the whole sun-highβ¦ You thought, standing up off the cold, gray stone floor of the cave and traveled outside it. Straight into a semi-circle of cats.
βLarkstar!β One of the five catβs shouted, βwe have the cat!β
βRight here!β Another exclaimed. βWeak, by the looks of it!β
You trembled in fear, judging by their muscled appearances these cats could fight. If you wanted to retreat, all you could do is go back in the cave for a method of escape. But somehow, you found enough courage to stand up against all these strange cats.
βI know this already. I'm not blind,β a she-cat, probably the leader as all the others were looking up at her, said. βWhat are you doing on our Clan territory, cat?β She questioned you, padding closer to you and stopping one wolf-length away, her eyes judging.
You knew she could smell your fear-scent, but tried to seem brave anyway. βI didnβt know I was on your Clanβsβ¦territory? If I am
disturbing youβ¦β
Then let me leave! Your mind finished, making you tremble even more, and every cat there knew it wasn't because of.
The she-cat purred, her rude and fierce facade replaced with something you couldnβt place your paw on, but it looked happy. βI like you, acting brave even though you arenβt. We could use more of thatβ¦β her eyes became wistful, as though reflecting on something that had happened in the past. Then her eyes became clear again, shining brightly. βWould you like to join our Clan?β
IceClan
Leader:
Larkstar: Role-played by Larkfeather
Deputy:
Open
Medicine Cat:
Open
History:
Almost 60 moons after Gray Wing took his fellow mountain cats off the mountains, another group of the mountain cats decided to disperse. Led by Shattering Skies, they went a different way down the mountain. Several moons later they were hungry, tired, and now stranded at the mercy of a flooding river. Three other warriors stepped up, Blossoming Lily, Spotted Deer, and Lonely Wolf, and together with Shattering Skies, safely corralled the band of cats passed the river and to safety on the other side. The four cats led the cats together, forming a strong bond. They incidentally traveled north, heading into colder territory. After scouting the nearby land, Shattering Skies declared that they would stay. It wouldn't be an easy split, as the group had become close, but tensions would rise. They had gained several more cats on the pathway to their new homes and several of the rogues fell into disagreement with the mountain cats. Fighting ensued, and it was Starry Moon that stopped the fighting, forcing the group to separate into four separate groups to live separately. MoonClan was led by Shattering Skies and Starry Moon, SunClan was led by Spotted Deer, DayClan was led by Blossoming Lily, and NightClan ruled by Lonely Wolf. Everything went relatively peacefully for nearly 30 moons, the only problem was the wolves, foxes, and rare cougars, until everything changed. An endless, violent blizzard enveloped over the Clans, killing almost half of the Clan cats. The four Clans had joined together to support each other throughout the storm, but very few actually survived. Two Clans are born out of the remnants of the fallen Clans, IceClan and FireClan.
Introduction: As you padded into the bushes of the light forest-land, your paws became tired and soon began dragging against the snow-covered ground. You ventured on, not quite sure why you bothered to even travel as you felt you were almost going to shut down with exhaustion. As you emerge from the forest, you find yourself in a completely snow-covered area. You shiver as the cold wind blows through your fur, and quickly try to find a space for refuge. You find a cave onto your right, and run into to it, curling up on the cold stone floor and going to sleep to regain your energy.
When you wake up, you see the sky, black as a wolf in the shadows.
I mustβve slept the whole sun-highβ¦ You thought, standing up off the cold, gray stone floor of the cave and traveled outside it. Straight into a semi-circle of cats.
βLarkstar!β One of the five catβs shouted, βwe have the cat!β
βRight here!β Another exclaimed. βWeak, by the looks of it!β
You trembled in fear, judging by their muscled appearances these cats could fight. If you wanted to retreat, all you could do is go back in the cave for a method of escape. But somehow, you found enough courage to stand up against all these strange cats.
βI know this already. I'm not blind,β a she-cat, probably the leader as all the others were looking up at her, said. βWhat are you doing on our Clan territory, cat?β She questioned you, padding closer to you and stopping one wolf-length away, her eyes judging.
You knew she could smell your fear-scent, but tried to seem brave anyway. βI didnβt know I was on your Clanβsβ¦territory? If I am
disturbing youβ¦β
Then let me leave! Your mind finished, making you tremble even more, and every cat there knew it wasn't because of.
The she-cat purred, her rude and fierce facade replaced with something you couldnβt place your paw on, but it looked happy. βI like you, acting brave even though you arenβt. We could use more of thatβ¦β her eyes became wistful, as though reflecting on something that had happened in the past. Then her eyes became clear again, shining brightly. βWould you like to join our Clan?β
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Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on Jun 2, 2017 19:27:41 GMT -5
I really like it, nice and simple! It looks fantastic, thank you!
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 2, 2017 20:14:42 GMT -5
They are just two layouts for IceClan (you can chose which one you like best). I'll also make two for FireClan when I get the chance to.
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Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on Jun 2, 2017 20:27:35 GMT -5
I like the first one, its perfect!
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 3, 2017 15:09:56 GMT -5
(Here are the two FireClan layouts. Once again pick your favorite!)
FireClan
Leader: (The person who assists the most will be able to control FireClan)
Deputy: Open
Medicine Cat: Open
History:
Almost 60 moons after Gray Wing took his fellow mountain cats off the mountains, another group of the mountain cats decided to disperse. Led by Shattering Skies, they went a different way down the mountain. Several moons later they were hungry, tired, and now stranded at the mercy of a flooding river. Three other warriors stepped up, Blossoming Lily, Spotted Deer, and Lonely Wolf, and together with Shattering Skies, safely corralled the band of cats passed the river and to safety on the other side. The four cats led the cats together, forming a strong bond. They incidentally traveled north, heading into colder territory. After scouting the nearby land, Shattering Skies declared that they would stay. It wouldn't be an easy split, as the group had become close, but tensions would rise. They had gained several more cats on the pathway to their new homes and several of the rogues fell into disagreement with the mountain cats. Fighting ensued, and it was Starry Moon that stopped the fighting, forcing the group to separate into four separate groups to live separately. MoonClan was led by Shattering Skies and Starry Moon, SunClan was led by Spotted Deer, DayClan was led by Blossoming Lily, and NightClan ruled by Lonely Wolf. Everything went relatively peacefully for nearly 30 moons, the only problem was the wolves, foxes, and rare cougars, until everything changed. An endless, violent blizzard enveloped over the Clans, killing almost half of the Clan cats. The four Clans had joined together to support each other throughout the storm, but very few actually survived. Two Clans are born out of the remnants of the fallen Clans, IceClan and FireClan.
Introduction
As you padded into the bushes of the light forest-land, your paws became tired and soon began dragging against the snow-covered ground. You ventured on, not quite sure why you bothered to even travel as you felt you were almost going to shut down with exhaustion. As you emerge from the forest, you find yourself in a completely snow-covered area. You shiver as the cold wind blows through your fur, and quickly try to find a space for refuge. You find a cave onto your right, and run into to it, curling up on the cold stone floor and going to sleep to regain your energy.
When you wake up, you see the sky, black with white clouds. Like a badger. You think faintly
I mustβve slept the whole sun-highβ¦ You thought, standing up off the cold, gray stone floor of the cave and traveled outside it. Straight into a semi-circle of cats.
βLarkstar!β One of the five catβs shouted, βwe have the cat!β
βRight here!β Another exclaimed. βWeak, by the looks of it!β
You trembled in fear, judging by their muscled appearances these cats could fight. If you wanted to retreat, all you could do is go back in the cave for a method of escape. But somehow, you found enough courage to stand up against all these strange cats.
βI know this already. I'm not blind,β a she-cat, probably the leader as all the others were looking up at her, said. βWhat are you doing on our Clan territory, cat?β She questioned you, padding closer to you and stopping one wolf-length away, her eyes judging.
You knew she could smell your fear-scent, but tried to seem brave anyway. βI didnβt know I was on your Clanβsβ¦territory? If I am disturbing youβ¦β
Then let me leave! Your mind finished, making you tremble even more, and every cat there knew it wasn't because of.
The she-cat purred, her rude and fierce facade replaced with something you couldnβt place your paw on, but it looked happy. βI like you, acting brave even though you arenβt. We could use more of thatβ¦β her eyes became wistful, as though reflecting on something that had happened in the past. Then her eyes became clear again, shining brightly. βWould you like to join our Clan?β
FireClan
Leader:
(The person who assists the most will be able to control FireClan)
Deputy:
Open
Medicine Cat:
Open
History:
Almost 60 moons after Gray Wing took his fellow mountain cats off the mountains, another group of the mountain cats decided to disperse. Led by Shattering Skies, they went a different way down the mountain. Several moons later they were hungry, tired, and now stranded at the mercy of a flooding river. Three other warriors stepped up, Blossoming Lily, Spotted Deer, and Lonely Wolf, and together with Shattering Skies, safely corralled the band of cats passed the river and to safety on the other side. The four cats led the cats together, forming a strong bond. They incidentally traveled north, heading into colder territory. After scouting the nearby land, Shattering Skies declared that they would stay. It wouldn't be an easy split, as the group had become close, but tensions would rise. They had gained several more cats on the pathway to their new homes and several of the rogues fell into disagreement with the mountain cats. Fighting ensued, and it was Starry Moon that stopped the fighting, forcing the group to separate into four separate groups to live separately. MoonClan was led by Shattering Skies and Starry Moon, SunClan was led by Spotted Deer, DayClan was led by Blossoming Lily, and NightClan ruled by Lonely Wolf. Everything went relatively peacefully for nearly 30 moons, the only problem was the wolves, foxes, and rare cougars, until everything changed. An endless, violent blizzard enveloped over the Clans, killing almost half of the Clan cats. The four Clans had joined together to support each other throughout the storm, but very few actually survived. Two Clans are born out of the remnants of the fallen Clans, IceClan and FireClan.
Introduction
As you padded into the bushes of the light forest-land, your paws became tired and soon began dragging against the snow-covered ground. You ventured on, not quite sure why you bothered to even travel as you felt you were almost going to shut down with exhaustion. As you emerge from the forest, you find yourself in a completely snow-covered area. You shiver as the cold wind blows through your fur, and quickly try to find a space for refuge. You find a cave onto your right, and run into to it, curling up on the cold stone floor and going to sleep to regain your energy.
When you wake up, you see the sky, black as a wolf.
I mustβve slept the whole sun-highβ¦ You thought, standing up off the cold, gray stone floor of the cave and traveled outside it. Straight into a semi-circle of cats.
βLarkstar!β One of the five catβs shouted, βwe have the cat!β
βRight here!β Another exclaimed. βWeak, by the looks of it!β
You trembled in fear, judging by their muscled appearances these cats could fight. If you wanted to retreat, all you could do is go back in the cave for a method of escape. But somehow, you found enough courage to stand up against all these strange cats.
βI know this already. I'm not blind,β a she-cat, probably the leader as all the others were looking up at her, said. βWhat are you doing on our Clan territory, cat?β She questioned you, padding closer to you and stopping one wolf-length away, her eyes judging.
You knew she could smell your fear-scent, but tried to seem brave anyway. βI didnβt know I was on your Clanβsβ¦territory? If I am disturbing youβ¦β
Then let me leave! Your mind finished, making you tremble even more, and every cat there knew it wasn't because of.
The she-cat purred, her rude and fierce facade replaced with something you couldnβt place your paw on, but it looked happy. βI like you, acting brave even though you arenβt. We could use more of thatβ¦β her eyes became wistful, as though reflecting on something that had happened in the past. Then her eyes became clear again, shining brightly. βWould you like to join our Clan?β
EDI: I just realized something, I have to do a introduction for FireClan too. On it!
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Post by literalynxxo on Jun 3, 2017 15:14:16 GMT -5
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Hey! Is there any way I can help?
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 3, 2017 15:26:59 GMT -5
Also, here are some rules I came up with:
1) Follow all Forum rules 2) No spamming anything 3) No advertising unless told 4) Be Active! It's upsetting if you sign up and then never come back! 5) Make your role-plays more interesting and more able to reply to! No one liners please! 6) If you could, Separate chat and roleplay to make it easier to read. [like this] 7) No perfect characters, it makes them easier to relate to and more enjoyable! 8) There is no cat limit, but try to not bite off more than you can chew! 9) Please respect others! No bullying and no name-calling or anything like that! 10) Most important rule: Please have fun and enjoy the roleplay!
(So some rules I put together, of course you can change any of them if you'd like. I'm not sure if these are exactly what you want XD)
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 3, 2017 15:28:48 GMT -5
literalynxxo Hello! Maybe you can help with the plots? (I honestly have no imagination tbh.)
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Post by literalynxxo on Jun 3, 2017 15:34:22 GMT -5
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hhmmm... Maybe a cat was thought to have died from a predator out in the wild, but it was really a murderous cat on the loose?
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 3, 2017 15:40:55 GMT -5
I like it! The cat wanted to kill others for revenge because they did something?
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Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on Jun 3, 2017 16:23:49 GMT -5
I like the 2nd layout for FireClan best! The rules are perfect, I don't see anything that needs to be added. literalynxxo I like that plot! We can have maybe one paranoid cat that figures out that it wasn't a predator but no ones believes them? ((Sorry, I was out watching Wonder Woman and helping get stuff for my sisters graduation))
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Post by literalynxxo on Jun 3, 2017 17:02:35 GMT -5
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I love it! It could be like a Goosefeather haha Maybe it would be a young apprentice known for being rebellious and causing trouble. No one would believe them.
It would also make sense if the victim was their partner in crime maybe? Then they'd have a motive to try and find out, and the clan might see it as a way for them to call attention to his best friends death again
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 3, 2017 17:41:18 GMT -5
Love all the ideas! I'll give you the Fireclan introduction in one second!
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Bisexual
larkfeather
A little too excited that Black Widow is going to be in Black Panther #halfgayproblems
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Post by larkfeather on Jun 3, 2017 18:03:12 GMT -5
Cool, thanks for all the hard work Thornheart literalynxxo Ahhhh YES!! We just need to figure out a motive and all the cats involved, and also how to involve both of the Clans.
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 3, 2017 18:03:45 GMT -5
(You can make changes to this if you'd like! I just put she, but you can replace that and all the other details!)
As you felt snow pelt on your flanks, you pushed on. Panting you reached the top of a snowy mountain. After relaxing for a little bit - sitting down and laying your cheek on your paw - you stood up and trudged on. Not quite sure why you were following the paws imprinted in the snow. The cool made you shiver and the snow squint. You shivered more as a fresh wave of snow blew on your pelt. Even though you have a long coat, it did little to protect you.
You kept following the paw-prints before they finally stopped. You looked up from the end, confused. For a moment you thought you saw a flash of gray in the storming white as you looked up, but then you blinked, and there was nothing there.
I better head back... You thought, turning around and taking a step foward; still facing downwards. You to looked up from the snow-covered ground, wanting to try to seek any form of shelter, and you did. Instead of finding infinit white like you were supposed to, you found blue.
You jumped back in suprise. There was three cats in front of you, one in front and two behind. The front one - a gray tabby - spoke. "Namestar (FireClan's leader's name, just named Namestar. You can change it! XD), we found the cat that the scent we tracked belonged to."
A forth cat trotted out of the blanket of white. You stared in amazement. All these cat's were muscled and weren't even shivering - and they had shorter pelts then you!
The cat the lead one called nodded in acknowledgement, her tail-tip flicking in what seemed like annoyance. "I can see with my own two eyes." she snapped. Paying no more attention to the cat, she padded in front of the gray-pelted tom-cat, her tail-tip flicking on his mouth as he opened his jaws to say something.
She quickly stopped whatever she was doing with the cat and focused on you, no longer wearing a face of trust and instead wearing something closer to unease. "Hello, newcomer." She purred, her dark blue (you can change it!) eyes glimmering after she said her sentence. "I must say, you now how to track, well. Why did you track us, though?" Her gaze was gentle, though her eyes were guarded and searching.
"I saw your paw-prints in the snow while journeying - I am a loner," you added when you saw that she was about to make a comment. She nodded, satisfied. "And I felt...compelled to follow them..." you trailed off, lowering your head. Now you didn't even know why.
You heard the she-cat mutter something, it sounded like "Stars" or something along the lines of that. She looked up to the other cats and said something to them, they tensed up. You felt a knot in your belly as they looked at you; not glaring, bu not looking happy, either. Uh-oh... You thought, tensing your muscles and preparing to run, wondering why you didn't in the first place. Finally she nodded at them and turned back to you. "Loner, I know you probably aren't used to being in a group as you are called a loner. But..." she trailed off. Then finding new confidence and determination, she asked you. "Do you want to join my Clan?" ---
It's so bad! Don't worry, change it all you want (which is probably a lot! XD)
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Post by Thornheart on Jun 3, 2017 18:04:45 GMT -5
There you go larkfeather ! Do you want anything else done? (I could modify, edit, or do anything else you'd like! )
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