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Post by Deleted on Apr 24, 2017 17:01:33 GMT -5
hey so i just started writing this AU and i was wondering if anyone had ideas on where and how to start it? i haven't read TNP in AGES so i was using the stormfur wiki page to figure out the events.
would i start from the beginning of the journey or after feathertail kills sharptooth and survives?
to keep on this thread, how do you think their relationship would have changed the series?
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Post by Kibui on Apr 24, 2017 17:14:37 GMT -5
I think starting with the beginning of the journey would be better because Feathertail and Crowpaw would be too close for the other option to work.
You could also do something with the time shortly after the six cats started their journey when they were separated by twolegs. Brambleclaw and Feathertail found each other again almost imidiatly but it took them a night's rest to find the others. I think that would leave open a lot of options for an AU about the two, although one would have to keep in mind that Crowpaw and Feathertail already had bonded a little at this point.
In terms of how this would have affected the series I'm not sure because I'm unsure of how (ir)responsible Brambleclaw would be in this kind of situation and also how he'd deal with being in a forbidden relationship. I guess I could see Tigerstar interfering with this, similar to how he and Hawkfrost talked Lionpaw out of visiting Heatherpaw but again I'm not sure
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Post by Deleted on Apr 24, 2017 17:44:55 GMT -5
Kibuitrue! it would still work out though, right? if i made feathertail not care about crowpaw because if i rmemeber correctly, she's the one who reached out to HIM. so if she doesnt do that, it would give her a chance with someone else.
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Apr 24, 2017 17:51:54 GMT -5
Cool! I've been thinking of writing one myself.
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Apr 24, 2017 17:52:46 GMT -5
Kibuitrue! it would still work out though, right? if i made feathertail not care about crowpaw because if i rmemeber correctly, she's the one who reached out to HIM. so if she doesnt do that, it would give her a chance with someone else. Well, Feathertail also reached out to Crowpaw because Tawnypelt encouraged her.
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Post by Maplecloud on Apr 24, 2017 18:05:43 GMT -5
I feel both Feathertail and Bramblestar would be too loyal to their clans to even admit feelings, much less become too close. Also, Bramblestar seems very detached when it comes to serious romance, at least until he matures a bit more. I'd say that they would've developed a stronger brother and sister relationship.
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Post by Ligerfrost on Apr 24, 2017 18:35:46 GMT -5
I would start (only because that's when the shipping started for me) when they were apprentices just after Featherpaw, Stormpaw and Mistyfoot were saved from TigerClan.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 24, 2017 23:19:45 GMT -5
𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵why did she even do that in the first place!? i never understood it. tawnypelt is older than them, she should know that forbidden relationships are kind of against the rules, right? if she was so considered about crowpaw feeling left out, then why didnt SHE go talk to him!?
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Post by Pyropelt on Apr 24, 2017 23:27:26 GMT -5
Hmm maybe at the start of the journey in Midnight? Either way, the Feathertail killing Sharptooth and surviving is a good idea!
I think it would have been a nice thing to happen, and beneficial if they had kits. I think they could have changed cats' minds, starting with Firestar. I think he can be open minded, more than most in different situations. So, I think he would accept Bramble x Feather.
I'm excited to read your AU!
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Apr 25, 2017 0:11:11 GMT -5
I feel like Bramble x Feather and Storm x Squirrel would have happened if Silverstream had lived. She would have moved to ThunderClan to be with Graystripe, and different cats would be chosen for the journey. Feathertail wouldn't die, etc.
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