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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 18:24:41 GMT -5
This may be going out there, but what if we bring in BloodClan? "Apple" could rise to power without even trying as they admire her bloodlust. We don't have to make it an official Clan, as we can just have them mainly stay on the border page or something. And while she's reigning over them, she continues her little hunt because she can freely do it now.
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Post by Sand on Apr 13, 2017 18:30:13 GMT -5
I like it, even though I'm still reading through pages 1 & 2 right now. You two have it all figured out and have great input compared to me.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 18:31:17 GMT -5
Well, you just joined, and we still need to figure out how she joined and got to the top or do we kind of skip it and have her interrupt something like a Gathering.
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Post by Sand on Apr 13, 2017 18:34:26 GMT -5
Apple getting to the top of things could be explained through roleplay easily, meaning that it wouldn't be roleplayed OUT but be included somehow with whoever's rping her. For example, it could be said in her narrative -- if that makes sense?
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 18:37:25 GMT -5
That's true, or the people would be too busy with BloodClan. If anything, we can have them come in during a different plot. So, she goes to the twolegplace, then what? If she's killing for amusement, we would need a reason for her to come back. We could flesh out her character more and define what kind of killer. Does she laugh and just think it's funny or does she enjoy the thrill and is similar to Mapleshade?
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 18:41:51 GMT -5
I think that personality will fit with that idea. I didn't want to bring up revenge because not all characters are the revenge type.
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Post by Sand on Apr 13, 2017 18:43:42 GMT -5
I agree with Duo on the BloodClan idea ^^;.
Ooh, that personality sounds like it'll fit well; I'm interested in seeing how it will work out.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 18:51:56 GMT -5
That seems like a good idea. Phase two could be her trying to gain an "army" and planning her attacks, something not quite as fun as phase one, but it's something. We can add more onto it as well.
I'm going to make five quick saves for the territory and coding, we're going to be reusing some layouts and they have the territory from the lakes.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 18:59:56 GMT -5
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 19:00:07 GMT -5
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 19:00:19 GMT -5
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 19:01:25 GMT -5
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 19:01:35 GMT -5
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 19:04:10 GMT -5
maybe we could make it fun? tomorrow i'm sure i can come up with some fairly decent ideas, since i'm on spring break. but perhaps one of the cats in one of the clans is like a double-agent? like they're with "apple" but they're also loyal-ish to their clan and they don't want to get kicked out, but "apple" kills them once she realizes that they're not entirely on her side. I actually like that. They could have made a deal with their leader in phase one and phase two, they go back and forth. Maybe "Apple's" second-in-command finds out instead, giving the others some fun. She could have her most loyal cats toy with the traitor until she jumps in and kills them. I see her kinda staying back and surprising them and after they're dead, she kinda goes "Did you see the look on their face?" and laugh about it.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 19:43:37 GMT -5
I love Negan. So "Apple" is our Negan. Sorry I vanished, I was eating dinner.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 13, 2017 19:50:39 GMT -5
TWD, yes, I love it as well. Good night, Dou!
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 14, 2017 10:16:52 GMT -5
Agh. I hate character pages because they're clutter on their own. We can always make the descriptions under something line two paragraphs. Plus I don't see people making a small description then a big one.
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Post by ᴀʟᴀɴᴀ » on Apr 14, 2017 10:38:08 GMT -5
➤ [𝒸𝓇𝑜𝓈𝓈𝒾𝑒] | crossie, cro, etc <3 ● WindClan, if possible ● On the old forums, I did lead a few successful clans, self-made or with groups c: ● I just got back, but I plan on being on every day <3 ● Central ● Role-play Sample: The soft chirps of birds rang out across the forest, a gentle breeze waving the leafs on the trees. A soft sigh left the russet coloured she-cat as her ears flattened against her head. Annoyed with how somecat as annoying as Bristlethorn was able to get deputy-ship, she stalked along the forest floor. Her tail whipped behind her as she softly grumbled to herself. "How dare Mallardstar pick him over me.." she hissed. Gingerstep paced herself, knowing she was headed directly towards the RiverClan border. The girl dug her claws into the muddy ground, dirt flying everywhere as she walked. "You know, you shouldn't walk like that if you want to get your fur messy," a voice called out from up ahead, and immediatly her head snapped up. Glaring forward, her emerald eyes locked onto a gray tabby tom, his pelt sleek. Gingerstep could even see his muscles rippling under his coat. "What would you care?" she bared her teeth, her tail fluffing up as she watched him carefully. She was a smaller cat, her coat wiry. She was quick on her feet and she always had a strategy boiling up in her mind. "I don't think a beauty like you should get all dirty because you're upset," the tom shrugged. Gingerstep knew this tom, she'd seen him at plenty of gatherings. Gullstripe. "There's no reason to care," she hissed and started to turn away. "I know how unfair it is not to be chosen.. As I was picked over as well," He called over, chuckling to himself. Gingerstep turned her head back towards him, but her eyes shining with a small amount of curiosity. Her tail was slightly raised in defense, but she was suddenly interested in what he had to say. "Stick with me, and I can make your dreams come true. You can get revenge on Mallardstar, Bristlethorn, all the cats who have made you as resentful as you are," his voice was hollow, but the offer seemed promising. Gingerstep wanted this, but she wasn't sure if she should go through with it. "I.." she began, but the tom cut her off. "Meet me here at moon-high, and we can discuss." Gullstripe got to his feet and walked off, his tail swaying afterwards. There the russet she stood, confusion brimming in her eyes. Maybe she would take him up on this offer. The russet she wasn't sure. Turning around, she began to head back to camp. ● I might have a few along the way c:
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 14, 2017 13:51:16 GMT -5
CROSSIE IS ACCEPTED. I would have said so sooner, but my mom and I went to look at drainage rocks for her ferns. When she gets her flowers and other plants, I'll take pictures of them.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Apr 14, 2017 14:04:11 GMT -5
Same. I need to study and we're going to the drive-in later tonight. :3
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