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do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Apr 8, 2017 18:51:21 GMT -5
Dingoleap - you are very welcome! » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ - <3 take your time! whenever you get to it is fine, and you know i appreciate your support so much. ~Sapphire~ - haha i really love that line. it felt fitting for stone, tbh. she's got that sly, dry wit that peeks out only now and again. actually, coal is secretly the type of person to crack sneaky jokes and flirt, as discovered in my humanized version; he's just under so much stress in this serieswell, when you think you have it, make sure you pm me so no one on the thread gets spoiled. just in case.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 9, 2017 12:50:52 GMT -5
It fits well with her worldview. And it's always good to have some humour in there, even in a serious fic. Really? I demand that you let him show his flirty side before this triogy is out ;w; I will c;
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 9, 2017 13:35:13 GMT -5
Indeed! That's a shame... So without spoilers, how does the human version develop differently?
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Asexual
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Apr 10, 2017 13:36:15 GMT -5
well, it's just less serious all the time. i've found more pockets of levity and fuller character development, and also there are princesses and coal is a girl in this version because when i started htmf there was still that anti-lgbtq policy in place with the mods and i didn't want my hard work to go to waste because it looked like i was shipping too female characters. that's the fun thing when you get to original stuff. you can't stop me. ))
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 12, 2017 6:56:34 GMT -5
I like the sound of princesses! Do you think of Coal as more of a male or female character, in general?
And yes, it's good having the freedom to write for yourself.
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Asexual
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Apr 13, 2017 10:27:32 GMT -5
saph - given that coal and tawna have become truly separate characters just with basis in one another, coal is a male character and tawna is female. it would be a different story if i had been able to plow right ahead with female coal from the start, but they've developed independently. now it's just a matter of having the time to do so. rip me. ~Sapphire~ Owlmoon mintedstar/fur🦇 lazy penguin Mosspool Dingoleapanother update, just a little delayed this time!
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Post by Owlmoon on Apr 13, 2017 16:35:10 GMT -5
Off to read...
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Post by Dingoleap on Apr 13, 2017 19:49:39 GMT -5
Loved the new chapter, Tues! Man, I really feel for both Stonetail and Clay. The hopelessness and tension is almost palpable. That's something I really admire in this chapter - the scene is set so well and its so easy to imagine exactly what each character is feeling at any given moment.
Oaknose is also shaping up to be a real jerk. I'm not saying that I support the entirety of Featherstar's ideas, but in my opinion, neither of them are right. Thank goodness for Lakewhisker!
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Post by Dingoleap on Apr 15, 2017 21:24:15 GMT -5
Clay strikes me as difficult to write, tbh
You managed it superbly!
Mm, it's quite interesting! I almost feel like slapping Oaknose sometimes.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 16, 2017 14:30:41 GMT -5
That makes sense. Especially as characters seem to change anyway when you move them to a new universe.
Can I second Dingo regarding the new chapter? The mood is so palpable, you can't help but feel for the characters.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 20, 2017 15:54:23 GMT -5
Well, your effort's certainly paid off!
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Asexual
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Apr 23, 2017 13:26:03 GMT -5
saph - cx thanks. that's what i'm trying to make happen. anyways, new chapter! should be getting to completely new stuff in a couple weeks... ~Sapphire~Owlmoonmintedstar/fur🦇lazy penguinMosspoolDingoleap
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Post by Dingoleap on Apr 23, 2017 19:25:42 GMT -5
Ooooh, things are getting interesting! I love the interlude, Tues! I am positively intrigued!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 27, 2017 2:41:19 GMT -5
Very, very intruiging!
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Apr 27, 2017 10:32:20 GMT -5
Fan me on this as well!
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Post by Dingoleap on Apr 29, 2017 18:18:39 GMT -5
You can do it, tues!
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Post by Owlmoon on Apr 29, 2017 21:10:09 GMT -5
The new chapters are great so far!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jun 7, 2017 21:54:03 GMT -5
WHO THE HECK IS THAT CAT IN THE INTERLUDE/PROLOGUE ITS KILLING ME btw fan me fan me for infinity automatically fan me for the third book because I am fully invested
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jun 8, 2017 10:58:35 GMT -5
<3
You truly are an amazing writer, Tues.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jun 12, 2017 19:42:43 GMT -5
I know, which I why I like to say it as much as possible until you believe it!
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