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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 16:09:33 GMT -5
Thicketpaw, Batstar, and Cherrykit I'm guessing? :3 And Nettleleap! But yes, I thought darker pelt colors would be best but still with a bit of light color in it. Considering the story is a tragedy, darker color schemes are the best. but too many dark colors does not portray life and hope. I put a lot more thought into this than one would think :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 16:10:19 GMT -5
Yes, that is true. XD If you want I can suggest names. Same here! We can both help out if needed.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 16:15:00 GMT -5
Thicketpaw, Batstar, and Cherrykit I'm guessing? :3 And Nettleleap! But yes, I thought darker pelt colors would be best but still with a bit of light color in it. Considering the story is a tragedy, darker color schemes are the best. but too many dark colors does not portray life and hope. I put a lot more thought into this than one would think :3 It works really well :3 honestly Nettleleap is my new favorite name
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 16:15:30 GMT -5
Yes, that is true. XD If you want I can suggest names. Same here! We can both help out if needed. I might take that offer up. Thanks you guys
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 16:27:57 GMT -5
I took graphic design in school for 3 years, plus art class. I might not be the best writer, but I'm at least pretty decent at art :3 Helps with making nice banners, at least.
If you need a name, just give me the other information: pelt color, gender, eye color, and personality. But you don't need personality if it's an apprentice or kit.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 16:30:11 GMT -5
Sounds good. I won't need names for awhile but I'm sure I'll need them later
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 20:30:26 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 25, 2017 21:06:59 GMT -5
I find you a very good author, Sea.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 22:56:05 GMT -5
Thanks, Mint <3
Also, this is a free bump.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:19:18 GMT -5
New chapter up!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:27:54 GMT -5
I feel like the song Pompeii works for this fic
AND THE WALLS CAME TUMBLING DOWN UPON THE CITY THAT WE LOOOOOOVE!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 23:30:03 GMT -5
Pretty good! I really like the name Frostedweb, too.
"How will I give hope when I have to tell them that even Starclan doesn't know what to do.(?)" His chest ached and the pain grew more every heartbeat. (only error is there should be a question mark instead of a period)
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:31:07 GMT -5
Thanks :3 missed that in editing
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:32:13 GMT -5
Fixed
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:32:45 GMT -5
Now..... Where is Mint? *Waits eagerly*
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 25, 2017 23:34:29 GMT -5
Reading now!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 23:35:49 GMT -5
I must also say, you're writing is getting better. Grammar is improving, as well as structure. Nice job!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:38:31 GMT -5
I must also say, you're writing is getting better. Grammar is improving, as well as structure. Nice job! Thanks ^~^ I'm trying a lot harder and planning things out a lot better. Even though TNNOK and STWIBAG will always hold a place in my heart, I know for a fact that there are plot holes and errors everywhere and things happen too quickly. So many mistakes. But I plan to finish this one although I doubt it'll get another book
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 23:41:25 GMT -5
If you ever want an editor before you put chapters, I'll be happy to do it. You don't have to take me up on the offer, as I know it can be some trouble to post to one person and wait however long, but if you want me to I'll be happy to. You wouldn't have to credit me either. I wouldn't care, honestly.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:44:25 GMT -5
Probably not because I'm impatient, although I appreciate the offer. If you could keep an eye out for mistakes like you have been, that's more than enough :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 23:45:05 GMT -5
Yeah, I can do that ^.^
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 25, 2017 23:46:12 GMT -5
Love the new chapter and I'm happy we got to see some of Goldenmask. Sea's correct, your grammar has really improved since you first started writing.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:47:05 GMT -5
Awesome ^~^ I'll try to do the same for you
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:48:25 GMT -5
Love the new chapter and I'm happy we got to see some of Goldenmask. Sea's correct, your grammar has really improved since you first started writing. Thanks ^~^ I'm secretly shipping Goldenmask and Nettleleap. Nettleleap is my wonderful baby boy and he deserves happiness!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 25, 2017 23:50:34 GMT -5
Oh! Now we got to see if that happens. :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 23:52:03 GMT -5
Love the new chapter and I'm happy we got to see some of Goldenmask. Sea's correct, your grammar has really improved since you first started writing. Thanks ^~^ I'm secretly shipping Goldenmask and Nettleleap. Nettleleap is my wonderful baby boy and he deserves happiness! " Secretely shipping Goldenmask and Nettleleap" Announces to everyone XD
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:53:15 GMT -5
Maybe. Although I'm known to crush every bit of happiness from my characters
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:53:42 GMT -5
Thanks ^~^ I'm secretly shipping Goldenmask and Nettleleap. Nettleleap is my wonderful baby boy and he deserves happiness! " Secretely shipping Goldenmask and Nettleleap" Announces to everyone XD Shhhhhh. It's a secret
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 23:56:50 GMT -5
Lol, the best kept secret ever. It's safe with me. *locks mouth and tosses invisible key into the street*
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 25, 2017 23:57:49 GMT -5
XD
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