Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 17:05:10 GMT -5
The samples for Shattered Sky and Legends of the Clans are out finally! I'll talk about them once I finish reading them.
Thoughts on the sample for SS:
- I wonder how long the time-skip was from TaS since many cats including Larksong, Honeyfur, and Leafshade got their warrior names. Speaking of Larksong, I was kind of hoping for a name not already used. - Snowbird is a queen again with 3 kits... she now has 11 kits which is way more than Ferncloud had and people thought she was a kit machine lol! I'm not a fan of the kit's names though! My favorite name is Conekit. - There are so many errors in the allegiance... I try not to complain but Wasptail and Beenose are dead. They shouldn't be in there. And Lakeheart's kits are wrong again. This editorial team does worse than I would by myself... 🙄 AND BETTLEWHISKER IS STILL IN THE ALLEGIANCE?! He's literally been dead since The Last Hope! - So there was a battle with all four clans against the rouges and then Windclan retreated (because of stupid Onestar) but I don't get how 3 clans with over 50 cats would lose to a group of rouges with only 25 cats being able to fight... it just doesn't make sense. - Poor Mistystar getting that injury. 😖 I feel bad for her, I hope she doesn't die anytime soon even if she's old. I love her! Also sad to hear Perchwing die in the battle. - Violetpaw is a rat. She freaking beat up Twigpaw?! I was screaming like how do people even like her? - I usually dislike Ivypool but when she threw Juniperclaw off of Twigpaw I was like yes queen! 😂
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Post by Alpha on Mar 22, 2017 17:48:11 GMT -5
I can't find it.
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Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 17:50:37 GMT -5
It's on iBooks!
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 17:52:42 GMT -5
They really need a better editor
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Post by Alpha on Mar 22, 2017 17:54:09 GMT -5
I found it. These names are disgusting. "Lioneye" "Gullkit" "Conekit" "Frondkit" Also, Snowbird went back to the nursery? smh
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 17:54:45 GMT -5
Frondkit? What kind of name is that?
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 17:58:19 GMT -5
I'm not a fan of Frondkit either... And there could have been a better name than Lioneye tbh. Even Lionleap would be fine!
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Post by *Faith* on Mar 22, 2017 17:58:50 GMT -5
Er... that is a long time skip. So what are the names of Pinenose's kits then? They're older than Lilyheart's kits.
What are Snowbird's kits names and what do they look like?
Perchwing is dead? Aw. :c What kind of injury does Mistystar have?
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Mar 22, 2017 17:58:50 GMT -5
Thanks! Wow, Snowbird's a queen again? Interesting.
It would be nice if you posted screenshots, though in case someone may want to read the sample for themselves.
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Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 18:01:56 GMT -5
Mistystar got a scar "from her neck to almost her hind leg" it said. Also I'll post screenshots of the allegiance after this. C:
It has 2 chapters and the prologue! In the prologue Alderhearr gets a vision from Starclan of Echosong dying and realizing that Skyclan is out there and he needs to do something about it.
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 18:02:03 GMT -5
So Blossomfall's a queen?
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Mar 22, 2017 18:03:43 GMT -5
Frondkit? What kind of name is that? Well, a frond is an actual word. It's a type of leaf found on ferns.
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 18:05:17 GMT -5
Gullkit is the only decent sounding one if you ask me
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Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 18:07:18 GMT -5
Yes Blossomfall is a queen and is described as having her kits anyday. Also can you guys help me? I don't know how to upload my screenshots.
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Post by Alpha on Mar 22, 2017 18:13:06 GMT -5
Yes Blossomfall is a queen and is described as having her kits anyday. Also can you guys help me? I don't know how to upload my screenshots. Go onto a photo hosting site(like tinypic or imgur) and upload them there. Then, get the link to the picture(it HAS to end in a file extension) and use the photo button on the bar above one's post to insert the photo.
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 18:16:19 GMT -5
"I was coping before you were kitted" Leafpool I love you
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Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 18:16:50 GMT -5
It's not working for me. Can I just link the pics from imgur or is that against the rules here?
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Post by *Faith* on Mar 22, 2017 18:18:54 GMT -5
I found it. These names are disgusting. "Lioneye" "Gullkit" "Conekit" "Frondkit" Also, Snowbird went back to the nursery? smh Are Gullkit, Conekit and Fronkit Snowbird's kit? And what do they look like?
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Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 18:19:39 GMT -5
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 18:19:43 GMT -5
Can I punch Onestar? Seriously he used to be so likeable back in the original series.
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Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 18:20:32 GMT -5
They're in backwards order oops lol!
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Post by Alpha on Mar 22, 2017 18:20:36 GMT -5
Birchbark and Lioneye are evidence that warriors should not pick their own names.
Other things:
- Nightpaw(RiverClan) is going to exist, alongside Breezepelt's and Heathertail's kits. - "Foxface" what
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Mar 22, 2017 18:21:08 GMT -5
It's not working for me. Can I just link the pics from imgur or is that against the rules here? Don't worry, it's not against the rules.
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 18:22:25 GMT -5
Come on Erins, I know you can do better!
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Firepup16
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 18:23:30 GMT -5
Ok ME! 😂Although sometimes even leaders come up with weird names! 😩
Thanks Moth! I uploaded them above.
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 18:24:11 GMT -5
I think they've been running out of names
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Post by Alpha on Mar 22, 2017 18:25:40 GMT -5
I'm really hoping that saving ShadowClan is going to be the climax. I don't want it to be like Long Shadows, where saving ShadowClan was done in a few chapters.
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Mar 22, 2017 18:29:03 GMT -5
I'm surprised Lilyheart's kits are already warriors.
Also, Foxface? Birchbark? What's with the alliterations, never mind the odd name choices?
So that's what Darktail's group is called. Huh.
Do you think you could post the rest of the sample?
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Post by Firepup16 on Mar 22, 2017 18:29:26 GMT -5
I just realized I forgot the last page of the allegiance! The only cats on it are Snowbird with her kits Conekit, Gullkit, and Frondkit (the kits don't have any descriptions) and Ratscar and Oakfur as elders.
Sorry I don't think I can post the rest of the sample. 😞 Can anyone else?
There's also the sample of Legends of the Clans but only a small part of Spottedleaf's Heart was in it and there was only the Thunderclan allegiance.
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Post by mimikyutie on Mar 22, 2017 18:33:32 GMT -5
Honestly, I even dislike Needletail's name. At the very least, Needleclaw feels far more fitting.
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