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Post by Deleted on Jan 16, 2017 15:11:09 GMT -5
What characters could have been written better? I think Mapleshade, Dovewing, Ivypool, Sol, Leafpool, Nightcloud, Crowfeather, Breezepelt, and other characters I probably forgot could have been written better.
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Post by Uмвяᴀ on Jan 16, 2017 15:32:39 GMT -5
The one that comes immediately to my mind is Yellowfang.
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Post by Dawnrise on Jan 16, 2017 15:57:02 GMT -5
Cinderheart, definately. She had so much potential and it was all wasted on Lionblaze drama and confusing sub plots.
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Post by pastelpills on Jan 16, 2017 15:59:05 GMT -5
Don't forget Spottedleaf.
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Post by Dᴀɴɴʏ Pʜᴀɴᴛᴏᴍ on Jan 16, 2017 16:50:58 GMT -5
Everyone in OOTS.
And Mapleshade, just because she deserves a special mention.
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Post by Pyropelt on Jan 16, 2017 18:34:30 GMT -5
Ashfur and Brackenfur come to mind.
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Post by Dᴀɴɴʏ Pʜᴀɴᴛᴏᴍ on Jan 16, 2017 18:38:59 GMT -5
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jan 17, 2017 0:16:31 GMT -5
Yellowfang....Cinderheart, Dovewing, Tigerheart, Birchfall, Thornclaw, Graystripe and Spottedleaf.
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Post by Pyropelt on Jan 18, 2017 0:58:12 GMT -5
I feel like he could have been a main character, since he appears a lot as a background character. It would have been nice to have him as a main POV in a book. Also, does it feel like his apprentice-hood was rushed a bit? He was only a 'paw in the first two and a half books in TPB arc.
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sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾
rood yelling meanie
be cunning and full of tricks
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Post by sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾ on Jan 18, 2017 20:24:22 GMT -5
•♕• breezepelt/crowfeather/that strain of kitties •♔•
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Post by -` percy ´- .✫ 🌊 on Jan 18, 2017 21:22:51 GMT -5
Breezepelt most definitely tbh and i think a lot of the cats that trained in the Dark Forest could've been written better, ngl
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