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Post by πππππ π¨ on Jan 18, 2017 23:27:02 GMT -5
So...
I have this idea for a new character with empathy, sympathy and apathy based powers. She can sense feeling, she knows if someone is feeling pain and know what emotions they fill, for what reasons, she doesn't know. She can heal others(with physical pain or those willing to listen to her, and actually be motivated themselves to feel better). She can also inflict minor pain, like she can heal it. So heres a list of powers that would fit under apathy, empathy and sympathy
Apathy: Sense physical pain Sense negative emotions Inflict pain(minor, like a sting)
Empathy: Sense emotions Heal Feel others pain Telepathy Sympathy(might be it's own categories, but the powers are same as empathy)
Each power except healing and telepathy are relativity minor. These powers would be used to disadvantage too, if someone close is in physical pain, she can feel it too, which makes her apathy powers even more dangerous to herself. But if someone is far enough away, she would be okay, but could telepathically(Is that the right word?) sense it. I don't even really like giving her telepathy, other then the fact of how would she be able to sense their emotions? So technically, her two powers are apathy and empathy. Or fun plot thing, maybe Empathy can be the name of a hero, and her real name can be whatever, and Apathy is a villain and her real name is whatever. Just a fun idea XD.
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Post by Silverfall on Jan 21, 2017 21:33:02 GMT -5
It seems like that you have most of the characters, if you need another or a side one you could use Kate, my character.
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Post by The Noble Dragon on Jan 23, 2017 22:39:20 GMT -5
Okay so before we start any writing we should make a brief outline of the story and plan it out a bit. Obviously we can't do the end yet bc we aren't there yet in the rp. But we should plan out the beginning.
I think the Prologue should be Temptation just talking about the heroes and how they are a scourge to the city and world and shouldn't be trusted and stuff and basically demonizing them and gaining the trust of the government officals. I also think we shouldn't reveal that he is Temptation right away, leave it as a mysterious man till we introduce him later in the story.
The first chapter should be from Courtney's point of view and be that first meeting we had on the old Forums. We can tweak it bc I don't remember much about that meeting and I don't think it had a lot of substance to it.
Next chapter could be about that fight that happened with John Alex Sam and the villains. We should adjust the Villains that were involved because Trivelin isn't really a part of the rp anymore so we should replace her with a different villain. I think that chapter should be from Alex's point of view.
The third chapter should be from the Villain's point of view. Either Temptation or another Villain as they plan to kidnap Sam and other things.
Fourth chapter should be Sam's kidnapping, from Sam's point of view and include the kidnapping and perhaps their reuinion with Arthur.
and then we can plan the rest of course but this was just a quick thing. Any objections or different ideas?
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Post by Nariku The Avaricious on Jan 24, 2017 7:46:21 GMT -5
No objections on my end
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Post by πππππ π¨ on Jan 29, 2017 0:00:27 GMT -5
Okay so before we start any writing we should make a brief outline of the story and plan it out a bit. Obviously we can't do the end yet bc we aren't there yet in the rp. But we should plan out the beginning. I think the Prologue should be Temptation just talking about the heroes and how they are a scourge to the city and world and shouldn't be trusted and stuff and basically demonizing them and gaining the trust of the government officals. I also think we shouldn't reveal that he is Temptation right away, leave it as a mysterious man till we introduce him later in the story. The first chapter should be from Courtney's point of view and be that first meeting we had on the old Forums. We can tweak it bc I don't remember much about that meeting and I don't think it had a lot of substance to it. Next chapter could be about that fight that happened with John Alex Sam and the villains. We should adjust the Villains that were involved because Trivelin isn't really a part of the rp anymore so we should replace her with a different villain. I think that chapter should be from Alex's point of view. The third chapter should be from the Villain's point of view. Either Temptation or another Villain as they plan to kidnap Sam and other things. Fourth chapter should be Sam's kidnapping, from Sam's point of view and include the kidnapping and perhaps their reuinion with Arthur. and then we can plan the rest of course but this was just a quick thing. Any objections or different ideas? Alex I do not think was in the fight, maybe it can be when she decided to join the heroes? And her encounters with a villain(But not the old Nightshade, whom she originally encountered, because the character is inactive) So maybe the new Nightshade or possibly Venom? Maybe we can introduce Tonia in this chapter as well, so it is a Tonia POV/Alex POV, and maybe Alex and Tonia know each other, and they are talking, I mean it can be a Alex only chapter. But in it, maybe her and Tonia are at school and are friends, and Tonia discusses her odd black outs to Alex, and Alex discusses her loneliness, and possibly her parent's death as a POV explanation, that way we get to introduce the characters. Alex possibly at the end of the chapter school will be over, and Alex will be heading to her Aunt's house, when she is encountered by a villain, in which reveals her powers to the audience and that is where it ends for mystery?
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Post by Nariku The Avaricious on Jan 29, 2017 0:30:11 GMT -5
I like the idea, though there is only one thing I have a small problem with. I don't think Tonia should talk about her blackouts until her own POV chapter. While there could be possible hints, it shouldn't be deliberately stated to someone else, mostly because it would only worry people. I also think it would help with pacing.
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Post by πππππ π¨ on Jan 29, 2017 1:47:00 GMT -5
True! Good point, but this chapter would show more to Alex and her emotions. But show the secrecy and calmness of the present, which quickly changes. The chapters also can be long or short, and we will probably have more than 20. Sense we are sing so many different POV's. I believe we should start the writing process, we can all begin to write our specific character chapters soon and share it with the others. So Nariku, I will need help with Tonia's part, and maybe Ramsey can be involved. We can also put a twist onto the chapter. Maybe she meets John in person before she joins the Heroes, and he helps her escape the villain? Because again, this won't be exactly like the rp!
So...
Prolouge: Temptation's POV Synopsis: The story begins with an introduction to the villains plans. It will include Temptation's manipulation.
Chapter 1: Courtney's POV Synopsis: The formation of the heroes alliance, and the first meeting between the first heroes. Courtney is going to tell the heroes what is happening
Chapter 2: Alex's POV Synopsis: We get the idea of a civilians life who actually knows what is going on with the Villain's, and we see her fall indanger.
Chapter 3: Villain's POV Synopsis: We learn of the plan to kidnap Sam, the heroes co-leader, to get information and make the heroes pay.
Chapter 4: Sam's POV Synopsis: As we are introduced to Sam, they fall in danger quickly as shortly after the meeting, they are kidnapped and must face past fears.
Chapter 5: Tonia's POV Synopsis: Now we see through a civilians eyes who has no idea what has happened and what is happening, who attends school, and we learn more about her character
(End of the beginning) -The first POV's of the book are complete and we have set the stage for the rest of the story.
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Post by Nariku The Avaricious on Jan 29, 2017 9:23:22 GMT -5
Alright, sounds good
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Post by Nariku The Avaricious on Feb 3, 2017 22:18:38 GMT -5
I have a question about Tonia's parts. Should we have a chapter where she discovers/activates the device? I'm only asking this because of timing reasons. If not, then its fine.
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