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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 2, 2016 0:48:02 GMT -5
Haha she is quite fluffy x3
And despite what Firepaw says, she is quite nice. Firepaw is just bad, so she has no choice but to be stern with her xD
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 2, 2016 11:40:58 GMT -5
Tsk tsk Firepaw...
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Post by Jackalstep on Aug 2, 2016 13:15:30 GMT -5
I've read through Chapter Three, and I'm enjoying this so far. The characters have very different personalities, which is nice to see.
My only critique at this point is that Shadowpaw's decision-making process about joining the Clan felt a little awkward. It isn't clear to me why he should care so much about being useful when he hardly knows what's going on.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 2, 2016 20:37:35 GMT -5
Lol she's a brat. I love her xD I've read through Chapter Three, and I'm enjoying this so far. The characters have very different personalities, which is nice to see. My only critique at this point is that Shadowpaw's decision-making process about joining the Clan felt a little awkward. It isn't clear to me why he should care so much about being useful when he hardly knows what's going on. Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it x3 As for Shadowpaw,since he has no memories he feels very insecure and scared. So being accepted into the Clan,which he can tell seems important, he only wishes to please them. As sort of his way of showing his gratitude for being taken in. If that makes any sense c:
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 4, 2016 17:28:57 GMT -5
Thank you so much ;-; And yes they could if they didn't both have such strong personalities xD Also, sure thing! ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ --- Chapter Twelve is now up :3
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 4, 2016 17:44:50 GMT -5
Oh boy things are getting tensssse. Also I love the idea of an albino leader omg.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 4, 2016 18:45:01 GMT -5
Oh boy things are getting tensssse. Also I love the idea of an albino leader omg. Yes, very x3 And I love Icestar <3 I always wanted to do an albino character tbh lol whooooooo, new chapter!! things are getting so sketchy, too, with sandstar's death and whatnot. spooky... maybe soon i'll start placing bets on who did, but for now, i'll just watch carefully. Sandstar's death is very circumstantial. Can't blame Skystar for being overly cautious. And lol that'll be interesting to see xD
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Post by Jackalstep on Aug 4, 2016 18:49:24 GMT -5
I've read through Chapter Three, and I'm enjoying this so far. The characters have very different personalities, which is nice to see. My only critique at this point is that Shadowpaw's decision-making process about joining the Clan felt a little awkward. It isn't clear to me why he should care so much about being useful when he hardly knows what's going on. Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it x3 As for Shadowpaw,since he has no memories he feels very insecure and scared. So being accepted into the Clan,which he can tell seems important, he only wishes to please them. As sort of his way of showing his gratitude for being taken in. If that makes any sense c: Ah, okay, that makes a bit more sense now.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 4, 2016 18:50:28 GMT -5
Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it x3 As for Shadowpaw,since he has no memories he feels very insecure and scared. So being accepted into the Clan,which he can tell seems important, he only wishes to please them. As sort of his way of showing his gratitude for being taken in. If that makes any sense c: Ah, okay, that makes a bit more sense now. Glad I explained it well enough. I've never been good at wording things right xD
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Post by Jackalstep on Aug 4, 2016 20:04:16 GMT -5
Read up through Chapter Seven now. I really like Rainpaw; he makes me grin!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 4, 2016 21:16:58 GMT -5
when i start coming up with theories, you'll definitely know lol ask shadow. i can be very vocal when it comes to theories. Lol oh goodness xD And oh I believe you lol. I just wonder what you'll come up with x3 Read up through Chapter Seven now. I really like Rainpaw; he makes me grin! Rainpaw is precious, isn't he? <3 He's that little derpy character we all need in our life lol.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 4, 2016 23:41:45 GMT -5
Haha true enough xD
I also want to make a new poll, but the polls here only seem to do one question :c
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 5, 2016 10:33:14 GMT -5
I can help! I make my polls on SurveyPlanet. It works so well and it's completely free! Also you can require emails but make it like if I took the poll i can make my "email" sacredmoon@example.com so that way you know who voted for what responses c: You can do so much on SurveyPlanet and even more than the old forums!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 6, 2016 13:30:29 GMT -5
Oh that sounds wonderful! Thank you ;-;
I'll try to put one up on there then <3
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 6, 2016 17:34:02 GMT -5
You're welcome! I spent a lot of time searching google for a good place because we couldn't do them here anymore haha.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 15, 2016 13:06:24 GMT -5
Just doing a bump~ Will be posting Chapter Thirteen sometime this week!
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 15, 2016 15:43:52 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 15, 2016 20:01:00 GMT -5
Thanks! x3
I was busy Thursday-Sunday because I went to Otakon (a local con where I'm at). So I wasn't home or online much :3
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 15, 2016 22:10:17 GMT -5
Bruh that's awesome. I go to conventions during the year near me too o:
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 15, 2016 23:22:32 GMT -5
Yes! Cons are very fun x3
I only ever go to Otakon though. Next year it won't be here, but in DC Dx Of course, I'll still be going lol.
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 16, 2016 21:35:44 GMT -5
I got to two cons a year by me, that being Anime Central and Ramencon (though now that i have a job I'm gonna try to go to Con Alt Delete this December)
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 23, 2016 16:43:01 GMT -5
A new poll has been added! :3 Poll #1
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 23, 2016 19:31:11 GMT -5
I took the poll!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 23, 2016 20:56:52 GMT -5
Thanks! x3
I just started working on Chapter Thirteen today too! So I hope I'll had it done sometime after work tomorrow <3
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 23, 2016 22:03:07 GMT -5
Ah i can't wait to see it!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 23, 2016 22:06:00 GMT -5
Ahhhh thank you ;-; So how have you been? I got three new fish: A silver molly named Cyril, a Danio Zebra named Fizzle, and a Dragonscale Betta named Pyromethius x3
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