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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Feb 6, 2018 10:28:22 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 2, 2018 2:06:33 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 23, 2018 13:37:30 GMT -5
PtS is back to a regular update schedule. ^^
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 31, 2018 22:09:16 GMT -5
PtS was updated before I went on vacation and I think I might update now that I'm back. XP We'll see what I'm up to tomorrow.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Apr 28, 2018 0:55:01 GMT -5
PtS is still actively being updated. I can't wait to finish my first comic.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 18, 2018 13:35:51 GMT -5
See above statement.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 26, 2018 20:34:08 GMT -5
This says I haven't updated for a year. Maybe I'm just too lazy to update the date? Still updating PtS and that update is late (supposed to be on Fridays) so I'll get on that!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jun 27, 2018 16:53:03 GMT -5
PtS was updated two days ago. ^^
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 11, 2018 0:09:27 GMT -5
I really need to write out where I'm going with PtS. It's halfway done.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 18, 2018 3:22:21 GMT -5
PtS has been put on hold for a bit. It'll be back. Once I take pictures of new pages.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 20, 2018 2:53:06 GMT -5
PtS still on hold ... :/
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 11, 2018 17:46:08 GMT -5
Hah. This particular topic hasn't been updated for a year. Which is impressive, because that means that my comic is almost a year old. o.o
Anyway! I'm getting up comic updates again and I know exactly how much longer it is until I finish it. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it goes!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 4, 2018 2:07:50 GMT -5
PtS finishes this month!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 22, 2018 2:43:06 GMT -5
My draft for PtS should be finished today!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 30, 2018 16:23:17 GMT -5
It was finished. So now I get to prepare for the next section.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 14, 2019 13:45:40 GMT -5
Large updates are happening over at PtS.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 20, 2019 20:40:02 GMT -5
Would it surprise you to know this is the first thing resembling an update here in a year and a couple months? That's because working on a comic is long and hard and I'm almost back to working on this I swear. Anyway! Something like an update! We now have a map thanks to Aphelyon over at this shop! I have no idea where on the front page I'm putting it, but sorry for all the tags!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 22, 2019 0:09:12 GMT -5
PtS is two chapters away from finishing.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 13, 2019 16:19:57 GMT -5
Boop so I remember this exists. Someday I'll have to share the WorldAnvil world I made for this ...
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 19, 2019 15:23:44 GMT -5
Really just want to finish this so I can edit, heh heh heh. @.@
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 19, 2019 16:15:55 GMT -5
alrighty
Short story gaps in Toxic Valley that I need to fill: Gap between story 1 and 2 -- How Rattlesnake was chased out of the original lake territory
Gap between story 1 and 2 -- When Dream and the other group broke off from Rattlesnake. No details on where they went.
Gap between When you Leave and A Red Song -- Maybe one more story about what Rattlesnake is up to at home
Gap between When you Leave and A Red Song -- The Battle of Twolegplace was mentioned, where 'Mocking Jay with her thunderous voice and icy paws' snapped.
Gap between When you Leave and A Red Song -- "That would also mean that the Feline War had been going on for almost two years now." I would think you'd need to flesh that out more.
Gap between When you Leave and A Red Song -- "It nearly had killed Leaves and Carter didn’t really want to remember that particular battle." Another battle - not the battle of Tweolegplace - that you need to mention.
Gap between A Red Song and Crashing Waves -- "Mocking Jay left on her own…personal mission" In this case to find Rattlesnake
Gap between A Red Song and Crashing Waves -- Three Platoon Groups were lost between those stories. I advise showing the loss of at least one of them.
Gap between Crashing Waves and a Symbol of Loss -- The battle that Rattlesnake returned during.
Gap between A Symbol of Loss and Born to War -- “Mocking Jay went back to the clans to look for you." “She did?” He would have to find her. It was even more dangerous back there than it was here. But first he had to deal with what was happening between the Normals and Paranormals." "The Normals claimed they never saw him anywhere near their camp." Explain what happened to Rattlesnake and what happened to Mocking Jay.
Gap between White Like Seafoam and Island Prisoner -- What happened with Claire AND what happened to Rattlesnake.
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If I get those done, I finish Toxic Valley. Woot, woot!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 19, 2019 16:30:24 GMT -5
Wow. There are a lot less gaps in The New Era than I thought.
Honestly, Walking Ice should be the first story. The order is all messed up. Walking Ice, then probably Counting, then The King's Pawn, Our Last Storm, Ice Diving, Fight Song, The Healer's Poison, Sunshine with a Chance of Clouds, Poisoning the Sea, Tempest Falls, Driftwood Playing Pieces, A Lost King, Behind the Masks.
Gap between Counting and The King's Pawn -- Need to show some interactions between our main cast and Will. Maybe 3-5 stories. Gap between Poisoning the Sea and Tempest Falls+Driftwood Playing Pieces -- You well know that Sacrificing the Sun goes here. Gap between A Lost King and Behind the Masks -- You well know that Sandstorm and The Last Dime of Seaside goes here. Gap after Behind the Masks -- Find a freaking way to end this series, that's what. I'm pretty sure you were planning to stop at some point, right? RIGHT?
I would have gone on for longer, but my computer crashed all my files four years ago and I lost all my outlines. I've been working for memory ever since.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 19, 2019 16:45:41 GMT -5
Rattlesnake Rising is probably the worst mess in the whole thing. All those stories are aaaaaaaancient.
You are Rattlesnake Now, The Snake’S Prophecy, LARGE GAP HERE, Muddy Water, Mistakes are in the Blood, GAP, If I Said I Was Leaving What Would You Say?, And He Tells of Betrayal, VERY LARGE GAP, Dawn of Dreams, FREAKISHLY LARGE GAP, Everything I Knew, ANOTHER FREAKISHLY LARGE GAP.
Gap between The Snake's Prophecy and Muddy Water -- You're looking at at least 5 stories about generally talking about his group and how it's unstable loyalty wise. Just ... tones of background. Gap between Mistakes are in the Blood and If I Said I Was Leaving -- Three of Hearts goes here, as you well know. Gap between And He Tells of Betrayal and Dawn of Dreams -- Literally you need something like 4 stories here to express why Rattlesnake needs the clan territory and outlining his plans. Admittedly, Dawn of Dreams is ancient and pretty much not-canon at this point but the gap still stands. Gap between Dawn of Dreams and Everything I Knew -- Large enough gap here that two fan fics could fit. You need roughly 10-15 stories (we're aiming high on purpose) here to outline what Rattlesnake did in the clans, how he betrayed them, how he infiltrated them, and the Battle at the Gathering, and who even knows what else? Gap post-Everything I Knew -- Outlining Rattlesnakes slow decline but also about how some clan cats realized he isn't some evil monster. Find a smooth transition into Toxic Valley because there's a cat there who's pretty angry at him and that hate needs to be reflected in some stories.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 24, 2020 19:12:05 GMT -5
Doubt anyone will notice, but for the time being I'm removing 'If I Said I Was Leaving' Currently I am in great need of poetry to try and edit super quick up into something passable for school. Thus, I need to remove it for now. ^^
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 8, 2020 1:15:43 GMT -5
Did I ever put it back ... o.o
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Apr 29, 2021 0:54:24 GMT -5
A rogue update? Whaaaaat?
This is the battle with Rattlesnake's rogues and the clans.
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